Disillusionment,
in shades of evenings warning
tells of rains to come
***
Trying to trap a
reluctant and resistant
soul, colours life red
Written for Colleen Chesebro’s poetry challenge. You can join in here: https://colleenchesebro.com/2019/11/19/colleens-2019-weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-no-154-photoprompt/
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Beautiful….bravo
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Thank you, John.
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You did a great job with this prompt!
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Glad you liked these, Annette.
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Fantastic, Robbie 💜
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Thank you, Ritu
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That’s a lovely poem
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Glad you like it, Danny.
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Conflict colors all of our actions and emotions. These are words that point my thoughts in many directions, just like the image. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe, I agree that conflict causes emotional turmoil and anxiety.
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I like it!
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Thank you, Chelsea
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I really love this Robbie 💜
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Thank you, Willow
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💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
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I love your take on disillusionment!
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Yes, I wrote this when I was feeling quite upset the other day. My poetry is always a result of intense emotion. Thanks Denise.
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Poetry helps us through our emotions for sure
Hope all is well now.
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Lovely poetry, Robbie. Well done. ❤
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Thank you, Colleen.
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You’re so welcome. ❤
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lovely words to a really stunning pic 🙂
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Thank you, Kate
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Nice… I love that pic too! 🙂
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Thanks Kevin, it is a great prompt picture.
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I like your use of metaphor in both of these.
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Thank you, Liz
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You’re welcome, Robbie!
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Lovely haiku for desert images. 🙂
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Thank you, I’m glad you like them. I like photograph prompts.
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Well, you excel at them!
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Beautiful, Robbie. Your poem matches the intensity of the image perfectly. ❤
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Fabulous 🙂
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Thank you
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Powerful and beautiful pair of Haiku, Robbie. 🙂
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Thank you, Vashti.
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