Sanaa‘s d’Verse prompt is as follows:
Consider this line from Pablo Neruda’s poem from “The Wide Ocean.”
“Ocean, if you were to give, a measure, a ferment, a fruit
of your gifts and destructions.”
You can join in the challenge here: https://dversepoets.com/2024/07/18/open-link-night-365-with-live-edition/
Oh ocean
Oh ocean
How you sparkle and shine
Enticing
My toes embedded in wet sand
Welcome the soft tickle
Of your gentle waves
Despositing memories
The debris of my childhood
– Sea level rise is a natural consequence of the warming of our planet – 1
Oh ocean
Your surface tinted gold
By a ferocious sun
Your levels are rising
Insidiously creeping
Reclaiming land
Will you take from me
All I hold dear?
- Quote from Nasa

This is a puente poem. The puente form has three stanzas with the first and third having an equal number of lines and the middle stanza having only one line which acts as a bridge (puente) between the first and third stanza.
The first and third stanzas convey a related but different element or feeling, as though they were two adjacent territories. The number of lines in the first and third stanzas is the writer’s choice as is the choice of whether to write it in free verse or rhyme.
The center line is delineated by a tilde (~) and has ‘double duty’. It functions as the ending for the last line of the first stanza AND as the beginning for the first line of the third stanza. It shares ownership with these two lines and consequently bridges the first and third stanzas.
Thursday Doors: Oslo Fjord Cruise
For Dan’s Thursday Doors this week, I’m sharing some pictures from my Oslo Fjord Cruise. You are getting a break from traditional Norwegian buildings because I thought these pictures better matched the theme of my poem above. You can join in Thursday Doors here: https://nofacilities.com/2024/07/18/reiman-gardens/







Picture caption: photographs taken as we cruised around the Oslo harbour. The glass structure is in the harbour and is designed to catch and reflect the light.

Here is my YT short of the harbour mouth. It was windy and lonely.


Thank you to talented poet, Dawn Pisturino for this amazing review of Square Peg in a Round Hole. Michael and I are delighted.







































