d’Verse – A Haunting
Melissa’s challenge is to write a poem for an artwork prompt. You can join in here: https://dversepoets.com/2026/10/20/a-haunting/

Pelting down
in hard, icy bullets
sheets of water
distorting
elongating
shredding fog
transforming tendrils
into shrieking banshees
swooping and circling
forlorn chimney pots
ripping at streaming hair
flowing black rivulets
while beating in anguish
at their broken hearts
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Cowering behind
buffering door
child stands
ears covered
small, cold hands
blocking sound
holding back fear
desperate not to disturb
mother, who lies
prostrate with fever
oblivious to
devious deceptions
of storm filled night

Thursday Doors
For Dan’s Thursday Doors I’m sharing some of my photographs of doors inside Chateau de Chambord in the Loire Valley in France. You can join in Thursday Doors here: https://nofacilities.com/2026/10/22/more-october-doors/
This first photograph is of Chateau de Chambord on the inside as the photograph was taken inside the courtyard.

The following photographs are doors inside the chateau.
Sunday Stills
Terri is back from her travels and is hosting Sunday Stills. You can join in here: https://secondwindleisure.com/2026/10/18/sunday-stills-monthly-color-challenge-colors-of-lava-and-black/
Terri’s topic this week is colours of lava and black. I am sharing some of my photographs from inside the Sudwala Caves in South Africa.
This is what Wikipedia says about these caves:
The Sudwala Caves in Mpumalanga, South Africa, are set in Precambrian dolomite rock, which was first laid down about 2.8 billion years ago. The caves themselves formed about 240 million years ago. They are one of the oldest caves in the world.










The cave is such a wonder. I haven’t tried to enter a cave yet. Sounds interesting! And the doors look grand. Fantastic weekend to you, Robbie!
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Hi Hazel, I like caves and I have visited several caves in different places. It’s interesting.
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Che bello Roberta, even if the poem about the ill mother, together with Munch’s painting are sad, they are also most beautiful! The Mpumalanga Caves rimind me of the great holidays in South Africa . All the best 🌺
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Hi Martina, a lot of Munch work is heavy and sad. He was a person who suffered from depression. These caves are interesting to visit.
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Yes, you are right and they give me goose pimples. He seems to show us life from his side.
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Yes, I think that is true
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I enjoyed your poem, Robbie. One of the few regrets I have due to being blind is my inability to appreciate visual art, but your poem brings the painting to life.
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Hi Kevin, I am very pleased to know that. I have finished your poetry book and will get my review written this week.
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Many thanks for reading and reviewing my book, Robbie.
Best wishes, Kevin
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I had not seen the painting of the dead mother before, very poignant. That cave is amazing. People who discover and explore caves are very brave!
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Hi Janet, I have actually seen this Munch painting at the Munch museum in OSlo. It was not one I especially liked though.
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Haunting poems and great doors photos, but the caves are a wonder! Some of the oldest caves in the world–all the beings who must have wandered in there over the millions of years!
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Hi Merril, rebate some fascinating stories and myths attached to these caves. Thanks for visiting.
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You’re welcome, Robbie.
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The stalactite formations have an apt name ‘KFC’ 😀. Your poems perfectly described the paintings and went well together. The lady in the first painting looks positively scary. Munch’s painting says so much. Lovely photos! Have a great weekend, Robbie.
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Hi Smitha, that formation is aptly named. I enjoy writing to painting prompt. They conjure up unusual thoughts when I focus on them.
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The cave pictures are amazing. I enjoyed your poetry, and I especially like the Rain Woman image for the prompt (beautiful painting).
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Hi Priscilla, it is an unusual painting. Looking at it immediately brought this poem. The cave is fascinating to visit.
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My goodness, that cave… just extraordinary! I’ll love to go there.
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You could. It is near Nelspruit and easy access. It was pathways to walk on.
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We might some day…
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The photos inside the chateau and inside the caves are beautiful. You poetry is haunting and powerful. Brilliant post, Robbie.
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Hi Dan, I’m pleased you liked this post. This chateau was very unusual for France with very high ceilings and long windows. It would be freezing cold during the winter. Quite impractical.
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These door in the chateau were really pretty and the pictures of the cave too. Lovely the poem too.
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Thank you 😊
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An interesting post, Robbie!
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Thank you, Dwight
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You are very welcome.
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wicked awesome post… I am still blinking in awe over the caves
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Hi Annette, this is a fascinating caves system. I enjoy caves 💛
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Well done on the prose from painting challenge Robbie. Very evocative, and haunting.
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I’m pleased you like it, Brad
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Your words add an atmosphere to these two paintings….they add feelings and take the reader inside the images. Well done!
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Thank you, Lillian. They are easy paintings to write too.
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They both tell a story, the brilliant poem and painting.
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Thank you. Easy painting to write for. They are very evocative.
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Fascinating poetry and pictures of the chateau and cave, Roberta!
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They were interesting places to visit 🩵
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Oh yes, Roberta! 😍
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I am always astounded when the age of our planet is revealed. The cave looks amazing! Love the poem and you described the child’s fear perfectly. Great door pictures, too!
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Thank you, Jan. That cave is fascinating.
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Oh dear, it’s all so sad
The Fab Four of Cley
🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Well, some of it is fun.
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Cool caves. You would like Carlsbad Caverns in southern New Mexico, USA. Love those paintings. Edvard’s art is often disturbing.
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Thank you, Tim. I agree on all counts
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Very evokative and beautiful poems and the paintings are wonderful. I have to admit Edvard Munch’s, The Dead Mother, is very powerful. It certainly delivered its message. The photos of Chateau de Chambord and the cave are great and fun to look at.
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I was drawn to the woman’s painting, too, Robbie. Your poetry is fabulous in both pieces. 💜
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Your two poems are as chilling as the painting.
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Chilling begets chilling I think 🩵
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Definitely!
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Weaving together such powerful artwork-inspired poetry with stunning doors and ancient caves is brilliant. My personal experience with caves is not that much but we have cave temples which I visited. They were painted 1500 years ago with Buddhism, Jainism and Hiduism influence. They have UNESCO heritage tag and were forgotten for more than 6-700 years until discovered by John Smith in 1819. Ajanta and Ellora caves were the most fascinating for me of all other caves I’ve visited. There are other caves which were carved with paintings before middle ages in South India. Well the beauty in the exploration is that art found its place in some very unusual space. Thank you for Caves-photographs Roberta 😊
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My pleasure. The caves with paintings in India sound fascinating. If you have any photographs I would be lovely if you shared them 💞. We have ancient San art in some of our caves which is very interesting. There are also some amazing and ancient humanoid fossils in South Africa.
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Heartbreaking poem and great photos, Robbie!
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Thank you, Dave. Interesting painting that evoked dark thoughts
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Caves are intriguing and some can be difficult and dangerous to explore. Your photos are great. I see on Wikipedia that the Sudwala Caves were inhabited by early humans more than 2 million years ago.
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Hi Audrey, what you read is correct and there are artifacts to see in this cave. It is a good one to visit.
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Appropriately spooky stuff! That Munch is haunting..
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Hi Jan, yes, both paintings are very impactful
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The art by Munch is always haunting, Robbie, wow, that poem really digs deep! Very creative prompt! Love the caves you explored, too, so perfect for the color challenge!
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Hi Terri, I’m glad I thought of these caves for your challenge. Have a great new week.
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Powerful heartfelt poetry, Robbie. The sense of dread is so well framed in your expert imagery.
Chateau de Chambord is fantastic, and that last carved wood door is stunning.
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Hi Suzette, thank you for your thoughtful comment. Have a good new week.
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You are welcome, Robbie. And a good week ahead to you, also.
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Thanks for sharing this poem, Robbie, Your imagery, as usual, evokes feelings, and again, I love your photographs.
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Thank you, Lindsey. I appreciate your comment.
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Thanks for sharing your poem, Robbie. Your imagery, as usual, evokes feelings, and again, I love your photographs.
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Love both poems, obviously I was most touched by the child by the mother’s bed… the covered ears tell me so much
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Hi Bjorn, thank you. I appreciate your comment
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terific combination of pics and poems, Robbie, and those caves !!!
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This is absolutely stellar writing, Robbie! ❤️ You nailed the prompt 🙂
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