Roberta Writes – Esther Chilton’s writing prompt: Funny Moments #poetry

Uncategorized 1 Minute

Esther’s writing challenge for this week is Funny Moments. You can join in here: https://estherchilton.co.uk/2025/03/19/writing-prompts-57/

New Blood

What a hoot

There is new blood

In fourth year at Uni

Competition

In the form of a young man

From an opposition university

This youngster and my son

Both chose challenging

Research projects

Both have double supervisors

One of Greg’s

If from Milan, Italy

He thinks this gives him

An edge

Over a double local package

But

The competition

Has four subjects for both

The first and second blocks

Greg had four and three

So, he’s signed up for

An additional course

Naturally the most difficult

On the list of electives

There is nothing like a little

Competition

To stir the blood

And make a young man work

“Well, Mom,” he said

In response to my enquiry

“I’m not going to be upstaged

by a usurper from Pretoria”

Reviews for Sunflower Tanka

Thank you to Barbara Harris Leonhard for this insightful review of Sunflower Tanka: https://extraordinarysunshineweaver.blog/2025/03/24/barbs-wordy-blurbs-sunflower-tanka-by-robbie-cheadle-colleen-m-chesebro/

Thank you to contributor, Chris Hall, for her lovely review of Sunflower Tanka on Facebook here:

Sunflower Tanka: An Anthology Tanka, Tanka Prose, & Experimental Tanka – edited by Robbie Cheadle & Colleen M. Chesebro

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

What a gorgeous collection with so many poets who I know, including myself. It is such a beautiful book (well done, Robbie) and I am glad that I got the paperback, as well as the Kindle.

There are almost 140 poems in this wonderful collection. The 36 poets are from all around the globe: from the USA, UK, Mexico, South Africa, Uganda, Guyana, Portugal, Japan, Philippines, India, Australia and Italy. Isn’t it interesting, and even more so the way the various styles are incorporated. The different forms are the well-known 5-line tanka form, the tanka-prose and the rensaku, but also the less known are the experimental tanka, the garland tanka, and the tanka Puente, all good though.

I have read from cover to cover and picked around as well. Now, just to say, this has been a lovely experience – it’s ‘In the Light’!

Unknown's avatar

Published by robertawrites235681907

I am a writer of young adult fiction and poetry

Published

64 thoughts on “Roberta Writes – Esther Chilton’s writing prompt: Funny Moments #poetry”

  6. Good for your son! I understand the competition, even though I’m not certain about what it is.

    Lovely reviews for Sunflower Tanka–congratulations to you and Colleen!

    Like

    Reply

      1. Ahh–I get it now. Good luck to Greg!

        My kids had top academic honors, but they weren’t really competing directly with someone. It’s different, I think if you’re not in math/science.

        Like

        Reply

  16. Love the story poem, Robbie. And I don’t know why I so love the term usurper! I have ever since watching Game of Thrones and the like 😉

    Like

    Reply

      1. Which reminds me. I have to go back to that one! I had started to read it and was interrupted, closed everything and now it is in my inbox somewhere. I really enjoyed that one, too! (But shall comment appropriately 😉 )

        And yes, I did enjoy this humorous one!

        Like

        Reply

  20. Robbie, your poem has me grinning from ear to ear.

    I want to know how it comes out?

    Pretoria…. hmph! Greg …Yayayay!!!!

    Congratulations on the fab review for Sunflower Tanka!

    Like

    Reply

Leave a reply to robertawrites235681907 Cancel reply