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W3 #95, Personification
II. Heather’s prompt guidelines
Humans often have opinions on most any topic. Let’s put a twist on this. Employ personification to write a poem from the point of view of an object. Maybe your teapot has an opinion on how you make tea or your door with all the comings and goings? Maybe snow has something to say?
Be creative and have fun!
Personification
Personification is a type of metaphor that gives human characteristics to inanimate objects and animals, such as emotions and behaviors.
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My poems are personification but I’m not sure my objects are quite what Heather intended. Oh well!
Mischief Makers (shadorma)
Mielie elves
With long hollow bones (note 1)
Look about
Pondering
Numerous mischievous plans
Pink toed feet ready

Note 1 – Elves are believed to have hollow bones, like birds, to aid their flight.
Old Man (choka – 5/7/5/7/5/7/5/7/7)
Greying hair streaming
Sun journeys across the sky
Ample girth straining
At the buttons of his shirt
Burning bright and hot
Despite his advancing age
Slow later mornings
Nurture his remaining strength
Afternoons fiercely blazing

So nice 👌
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Thank you, Yassy
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a wonderful blend of pics and poetry: esp ‘ample girth straining/ at the buttons of his shirt’ —
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Hi John, my dad was the inspiration for that but don’t tell him – grin!
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lol 🙂 🙂 between you and me Roberta 🙂
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😊
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I love your personification poems and oh those photos…thank you for sharing Robbie❤️
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My pleasure, Michelle, I’m glad you enjoyed these poems.
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wonderful post …. email on its way 💜💜
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Thank you, Willow. It’s nice to see you. Hugs.
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Robbie, what’s in the photo underneath the shadorma? I feel like I need to understand that to understand the poem, yes?
~David
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HI David, I included a caption beneath the picture which should help. Thanks for letting me know you didn’t understand.
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oh! cool! thanks – I’d never heard of that plant before. I so often learn new things from you, Robbie…
both your poems are so delightful ❤
~David
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Hi David, your comment really pleases me. Thank you 💚
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Robbie 👋🏻
I just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by Lorraine Lewis (blindzanygirl) is now live ~ hooray!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/02/28/w3-prompt-96-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy 😀
Much love,
David
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Thank you, David
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*hug*
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hi, Robbie 👋🏻
This week’s W3, hosted by the lovely Jane Aguiar, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/03/06/w3-prompt-97-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
❤ David
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Thank you, David
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*hug*
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Beautifully Shardoma Robbie.
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I’m so pleased you liked it Sadje.
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😍😍😍
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Wow–you truly live in a place so foreign to me. That termite mound!
I love your photos. That plant does seem to have pink toes, and the sun is truly blazing.
“Ample girth straining
At the buttons of his shirt”
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Hi Merril, thank you. I suppose the bush is very different and wild for many people. We’ve had no water because a hyena chewed the pipe and no power because rhinos knocked down the power lines.
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Hi Robbie. I can honestly say it’s very unlikely that we will not have water or power because of hyenas or rhinos! 🙂
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Haha, I am sure.
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What a start and finish to your post, Robbie! That mini-mini airport and the blazing sky. 😲
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Hi Dave, I guess it’s like being on a different planet for many people when they read these posts. Reserves are always animals first and I like that 💚
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Yes! And “vive la différence,” as the saying goes. 🙂
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Wonderful post Robbie. Lovely words.
And about the doors. Is there a door you CAN close in the bathroom 🚽? I hope so.
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Hi Selma, yes, there are separate male and female toilets with closing doors. I’m glad you enjoyed this post.
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That is some airport. Thanks for submitting yourself to the black ants in order to get this photo!! I wonder what the airplanes look like that land there. Love the poems too.
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I have stepped on black ants nest holes several times when taking pictures in the bush. I did it twice on this 3 day trip. It’s always worth a few nips 😂
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I meant to add that it is small planes that land here. 2 or 4 passenger planes. They fly directly from our international airport which doesn’t have any animals on the runways 😂🤣
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I thought it was probably for small planes. xo
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Absolutely.
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I appreciate the effort (and apparent danger) in getting those photo, Robbie. The airstrip seems to coexist with its surroundings. I like that. The mielie plant is interesting, and I agree about the pink toes. I can see why you chose that plant to work with.
I hope you’re having a great weekend.
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Hi Dan, yes, thank you. I hope your weekend is also off to a good start.everything in the reserves is animals first. It’s great.
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What an interesting airport terminal … and it made me smile. But ouch to the black ant bites. Thumbs up to the Old Man poem and visual. 🙂
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Hi Frank, thank you. I’m have stepped on ants nest holes a few times in the pursuit of photographs. I’m glad you like the poem.
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I wonder how many flights go in and out of the airport daily? I love the pink toes and your poetry.
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Hi Jennie, not many and not every day even. These are flights from our international airport straight to the reserve. Most people either drive or get a shuttle as it’s only a 4 hour drive.
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Wow!
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Thank you, Chris 💗
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Beautiful sunset. That is a very basic airport terminal. However, it is much more sophisticated than airports I flown into on the Navajo reservation in northern Arizona and Southern Utah.
I knew that was a herd of gnu on the runway before I read your caption. I’ve used software licensed under the Free Software Foundation’s GNU copyleft GPL (general public license) for 30 years. The FSF GNU is not an acronym. It’s the animal like in your photo.
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Hi Timothy, I’ve often thought there are a lot of similarities between some parts of South Africa and some parts of the USA.its nice to have it confirmed.
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Our desert southwest and South Africa are quite similar to each other. A lot of the non-native plants that are use for landscaping out here come from South Africa.
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That is very interesting
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We have a train depot like that near my house–clean, spare, easy to figure out.
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Very nice. I get overwhelmed in huge airports and tube stations.
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Love the airport. We have a lot of ranch runways around here and most of those don’t even have a building. They do get animals on the runway. Even in Sun Valley, they have to chase deer off the runway. I also love your elf plant.
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Hi Craig, we also have runways on farms. They use them for the Arial crop sprayers. I’m glad you like my ‘elves’.
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Great photos and poetry, Robbie! Those gnus on the airport runway remind of flying into Oxnard, California in a prop plane so small we could talk to the pilot. As we were getting ready to land, he laughed about trying to land there once and there was a heard of cows on the runway. 😁
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Hi Tim, I can imagine this happens in the more rural parts of the USA. There are many similarities between SA and some US states 💓
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I like that the wildebeests are hanging out on the runway 🙂
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Thanks, Dave. It’s amazing.
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I enjoyed your post. Sorry you had to endure bites to get these awesome pictures of the airport. They give a real sense of the place. Some wonderful images in your writing to personify the sky (grey hair streaming, sun journeying) and the plant (pink toed feet ready). Thanks for participating.
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It is my pleasure. I’m glad you enjoyed the post 🥰
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Here I thought Presque Isle, Maine had the tiniest airport. Apparently not!
I enjoyed both of your personification poems. I loved “the pink toed feet”!
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HI LIz, it is a funny little airport. I was quite enchanted. I love the mielie plants with all their quirky characteristics. They are just starting to blossom now.
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I look forward to seeing the blossoms!
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I managed to get a shot yesterday. They are very high up at present and I am not very tall.
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I’m sure the shot will at least give a sense of the overall plant.
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The mielie plant’s pink shoots do look like toes. I enjoyed both poems. The wildebeests have long legs that look like moose legs.
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Hi Priscilla, you are right about the wildebeest. They are fairly common and effectively food for the predators, but I find them very cute and interesting.
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Love the poetry. You really excel with verse, Robbie.
The pictures are mind-blowing, especially of the airport. And my mouth dropped looking at that termite mound. It made me want to run and hide!
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Hi Mae, thank you, I am delighted you enjoyed these pictures. We are going to Pilanesberg Game Reserve soon and I am very excited.
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You open many doors, Robbie. I love entering them with you.
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Thank you, Rebecca. I am delighted you are interested in these doors.
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I am so sorry that you were nipped by black ants for us. The photos of the airport are very cool though so I greatly appreciate it. Hope those bites heal soon!
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Haha, they do bite but it wasn’t a catastrophe. I got them off quickly. The airport is interesting, isn’t it?
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They do look like feet! And ready for action. (K)
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Hi Kerfe, I know, it is quite amazing.
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The termite mound caught my attention. Wow! It ate up all the buildings! I also love the pink -toed feet!
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HI Marsha, I’m glad you like those pictures. They are unusual.
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Some of them sure are. Of course, we don’t see those animals in our back yards! 🙂
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We don’t either, except on very odd occasions. There was a hyena in our local park a few years ago and a crocodile in the local dam.
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We don’t get any of those either, LOL!
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Wow! I love the airport, but sorry the ants got you. Love the photos and poems.
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Hi Jan, I often get nipped by ants in the bush. They are insidious little creatures. I’m glad you enjoyed these pictures, a bit different from Texas.
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Pink toes on a plant are over-the-top cool! Thank you for your poetic photography, and your photographic poetry!
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HI Annette, this is a most lovely comment. Thank you.
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I was almost expecting a poem written by the anteater who is going to find that termite mound and feast! Lol.
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Thank you for your comment. I didn’t write about Aardvark’s this time, I have done so in previous poems.
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Wonderful poems and photos, Robbie, and I just read that the photos were for small airplanes which put me at ease. And what a termite mound! And the herd of wildebeests on the runway cracked me up. I thought that couldn’t be an international airport. 🙂 🧡
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Hi Lauren, no, its just a small airport on the game reserve. It brings small groups of tourists who don’t want to come via car or shuttle. Personally, I like to drive and experience the countryside.
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Of course the Wildebeast meeting is essential for any airport. Love the photos!
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Absolutely, the previous time, it was baboons having a discussion group on the runway. So funny
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Yikes! I had to read that twice to make sure I’d got it right! What an unusual and rather minimalist airport and well done for braving the ants for the photo! I enjoyed your poetry and really felt the personification of the ‘toed- plant. Mischievous looking indeed – and ready to head into The Day of the Triffids territory!😀 Hope you’ve had a great weekend, Robbie and all set for the week ahead! xx
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HI Annika, I am delighted you made the ‘Day of the Triffids’ connection. I always think these plants are just like triffids but not that many people know that book now.
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I love all John Wyndham books and as a teenager read many of them over and over! Your poem was spot on!
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fascinating post as always Robbie – goodness, my home would be a mere snack for those termites lol
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Luckily, we don’t get termites in the cities. I’m glad you enjoyed my pictures and poems.
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Interesting the way critters act differently in different environments. We’ve got plenty in the city here
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amazing
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Your p are worth every nip, Robbie! 🥰
A magical shadorma. 🧝❤️
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Your p? Should read photos!
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Hi Robbie, thank you for a beautiful post!
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I’d love to visit that airport someday. I’m always fascinated by your photos! Excellent work on the poetry, too. Especially the, “Old Man Choka.”
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As always a fascinating post: clever poetry and lovely (and unusual) photos. PInk toes!!!
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Interesting! ♡ ︎
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Thank you
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What an airport! Loved it, Robbie. But sorry about the ants. Ouch.
And wonderful poems. The Mielie roots do look like toes. Lol. And a beautiful poem about old man sun. What a sunset!
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HI Diana, I am really enjoying this kigo words challenge although I don’t really bother with kigo words, I just create seasonal poems. I am really seeing a lot of things in the garden as a result of my keen eye.
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I notice that too. It’s great fun.
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Eww, I’m so bad with insects. The ants and termites would do me in, lol.
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My husband doesn’t like insects, especially spiders. There aren’t many in the rooms. You get the odd spider, but not a lot of insects. We don’t even have mosquitoes there. We have more at home.
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That is some sunset Robbie! Ouch re ants – at least not ants in your pants 😵💫
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Haha, thankfully no, only in my socks. I’m glad you enjoyed my photographs.
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Always a wonderful mix of images and poetry, Robbie.
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Thank you, Carla. I’m glad you enjoyed this post.
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Terrific Robbie!
Love the doors, the airport, toes and mostly your poetry.
Thank you!
Now…. the termite mound. EEEEEEeeeeeeEEeEEeeeeeek! 😳😬
xx
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Hi Resa, the termite mounds are huge in this area. I’m delighted you enjoyed my pictures and poems.
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Beautiful pictures and poetry
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Thank you 🙏
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So nice🌹
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Thank you
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Welcome 🌹freinds
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Thanks
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My pleasure
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Lovely poems and photos Roberta! I like your Mielie plant photo. And, your shodorma made me smile..thinking of the plots that those elves may engage in . Nicely done! Thank you.
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My pleasure, I am delighted you enjoyed this post 💕
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