
Crash! The en suite bathroom door slams shut.
Michelle jumps and whips her head in the direction of the noise. She makes out a second shape dimly outlined against the door’s stark white paint. The figure’s khaki uniform, knee-high boots and helmet are clearly visible, as well as the rifle he holds in place over his left shoulder. The front of his tunic is stained an inky black.
It’s a soldier. A dead one. Holy Crap! Her scalp prickles as the hair on her head tries to stand up and fails due to its length and weight.
A movement from the bed briefly attracts her attention. Tom moves restlessly, but, strangely, the slamming of the door has not woken him. She opens her mouth to call out, but no sound issues from her strained throat.
Her eyes dart back to the first shadow. The man in the hat has closed the gap between them; his back is rigid and his posture aggressive. Unlike the soldier, he appears to be unarmed. He stands in front of the dressing table, and she can see her own reflection right through him. It is distorted, like looking through the bottom of a coke bottle. He has no reflection. She closes her eyes and takes a deep and steadying breath. I’m dreaming. The weird events of last night disturbed me and have manifested as a nightmare. What’s happening is not real. There is no such thing as ghosts.
Opening her eyes, she glances quickly towards the bed. Tom sleeps on, his breathing soft and restful. There’s no help coming from him. Irritation at his complacent slumber briefly displaces her fear, crowding it out like the incoming tide.
A soft rustling gives the soldier’s movements away. He has stepped forward and is standing at the edge of the king-sized bed. His weapon is raised and its wooden stock shimmers in the faint light. Michelle can see his face now, its handsome lines marred by bitterness and anger.
A shudder wrenches its way through her body, as her eyes skitter from one apparition to the next, trying to see which one will move next. A strong wind rushes past her as the soldier streaks across the room and collides with his adversary. On impact, both shapes disappear.
This extract from my forthcoming novel, A Ghost and His Gold, is shared for Sue Vincent’s write photo prompt, Dreams. You can join in her: https://scvincent.com/2020/07/02/thursday-photo-prompt-dream-writephoto-2/

Your next novel is proving to be quite the read! Well done you.
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Thank you, Annette. I needed to spice up the history.
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Poor Michelle. She must have been scared witless. Good excerpt!
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Thank you, Priscilla. Indeed, and these are the good guys. She hasn’t met the poltergeist yet.
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Terrific sneak peek, Robbie – can’t wait for the book to be published! Bravo to you!
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Thank you, John. The thing I like best about writing is how you can almost visibly see how your writing skills are strengthening and improving.
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Wow! A great excerpt.
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Thank you, Darlene.
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This is when poor Michelle (my MC) gets to meet her new ghostly “best” friends.
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WP ate my comment 🙁
I was dosing off, but not now, wow!
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Oops, sorry Dan. This is a short extract from my new supernatural historical novel.
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That’s a tense moment! (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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Very nice, Robbie.
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Thank you, Kim
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Aw geez, I wish I hadn’t read this just before bed. I’ll be awake all night looking for shadows at the foot of my bed now! Great excerpt, Robbie.
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Thank you, Jessica. It is rather creepy.
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Your new book seems very promising, Robbie!
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Thank you, Clive. I am glad you think so.
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Well done, Robbie! I totally believed the two ghosts.
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Thank you, Liz. This is near the beginning and is poor Michelle’s introduction to the ghosts.
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Oh wow, Robbie! That is an excellent excerpt and you’ve hooked me!
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Thanks, Jan. I’m glad you liked it.
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You have me very curious.
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Thanks, Denise
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Too much bad news can give us nightmares. The start of the school year early, with new ‘rules’ for keeping distant, students and teachers (I think I read) will have to wear masks… the pandemic is a living nightmare.
The only way to get to where we once were are in dreams of good memories.
Ghosts can reflect very chilling images. I’m still reading your ‘gift’. I hope to read a few more chapters today.
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Yes, you are exactly right. C-19 is getting very bad here too, given that our population is significantly lower than the USA’s. Not as bad yet, but we are catching up fast and it is scary. I hope you are enjoying my book, not the ideal read for right now I don’t think.
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I did read a book about a friendly sort of ghost… (I keep a journal of books I’ve read).
The Ghost and Mrs. McClure (a haunted book shop mystery) by Alice Kimberly.
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I am sorry to hear that. This book sounds interesting. Not all ghosts are depicted as bad. I have a mixture in my new book.
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What a great passage! And a perfect teaser!
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