“The assault on our eastern defenses is a feint,” the Colonel says, “the real attack will be on the Native Stadt. Get your horses ready for action and we will wait for the Boers to make their move.”
Standing around waiting in the early morning cold is not pleasant. The cold seeps through the soles of his boots and turns his feet into unfeeling lumps. He stamps them to keep the blood flowing.
Cadet Richard Johnson is overflowing with excitement, his face young and shining in the dim light. Robert’s heart swells with pride as he contemplates the useful role in defending the town that these young English cadets, aged between nine and eighteen years old, are playing. The troops have come to rely heavily on their help in delivering messages between the various town defenses and acting as lookouts to warn them of impending attacks.
“Coffee’s ready.” Trooper Watson’s call is welcome and Robert and Richard head over to get their cups of coffee or cocoa. Robert wraps his hands around his cup, its blissful warmth in his icy hands almost outweighing the pleasure of the drink itself.
“When are they going to begin?” Richard asks eagerly. Robert opens his mouth to reply when the sudden red glow in the west catches his eye.
“I think it just started. Let’s go and see what’s happening.” He leads the way over to a nearby single-story house and they climb up onto the corrugated iron roof. They watch the fire fan out like a destructive burning spider-web. The flames from the Baralong huts that have been deliberately fired by the Boers, jump in fiery tendrils from one to the next. Within minutes the Stadt is a conflagration. Behind them the sun starts to rise, throwing its cheering rays across the horizon. The sunlight gradually creeps across the sky until it embraces the glowing red haze of the fire and merges into one.
Unease at the burning washes over Robert, but he is the only one. In the square below, his fellow troopers hurry across the square. “We’re going to have a good fight,” the shout rises above the medley of excited voices and sounds. The eighty-one men of the Bechuanaland Rifle Volunteers, under the direction of Captain Cowan, follow hot on their heels in the direction of the gunfire.
Robert sees the B.S.A.P. fort, which lies between the Stadt and the town and is occupied by Colonel Hore and a squadron of the Protectorate Regiment, looming up ahead, and only then hears the warning shouts that it has fallen into enemy hands. Squinting at the men running across the front of the fort, Robert can hardly believe they are the enemy until he realises that shots are being fired in his general direction. The two sides meld together in a turbulent mix, making differentiation between the opposing sides virtually impossible.
On his left side, a man falls, his chest exploding in a spray of blood and shattered flesh and cloth. In the melee, it takes a few moments for Robert to realise it was Trooper Thompson, a personal friend of his from back home. The shock barely registers as he continued running towards the fort.
Thank you to Sue Vincent for her amazing inspiration. You can join in her photo prompt here: https://scvincent.com/2019/10/31/thursday-photo-prompt-web-writephoto/
Extremely vivid, I felt as though I was on the battlefield.
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Thank you, Andrea, that is wonderful to hear.
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Life’s about to get real for these two young men.
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Yes, it am sure battle must be a huge shock for new entrance.
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Expertly written Robbie, you had me enthralled 💜
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Thank you, Willow, I am so glad to hear that.
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It the truth Robbie 💜
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What way to see the approaching battle and the moment it got real.
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Thank you, Denise. This is the beginning of the British perspective on the seige of Mafeking in my WIP.
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Most vivid, Robbie. Hugs on the wing.
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Thank you, Teagan.
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A very descriptive write. Congratulations
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Thank you, DAnny. That is a great compliment from you.
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Love that I get caught up in your stories.
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Yay, thanks you, Annette.
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Once again you’ve caught the tension and conflicting emotion. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe. I am always so happy when readers can feel it.
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Wow Robbie all of that came from looking at that picture.. Wonderfully descriptive giving the reader a visual image and sense of battle in those bygone times..
Well written my friend.. ❤
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This is really powerful, Robbie. It reminds me of how young soldiers were during our American Civil War. Great job!
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Thank you, Barbara. War is terribly tragic.
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So well told, Robbie.
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Thank you, Sue.
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You’re a great writer about such intense events! Wow – wonderful!
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Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed this.
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An intense scene, Robbie. Children in war is always such a tragedy. I love the imagery of the dawn blending with the fire. Powerful. 🙂
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Thank you, Diana. You always pick up my special attempt at imagery.
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My pleasure. 😀
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Nicely intense, Robbie. You write vivid descriptions well.
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Thank you, Dan. I am glad you think so.
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Excellent piece of writing. Will this be part of an upcoming book?
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HI Darlene, yes, this is part of A Ghost and His Gold. I decided to bring in the English soldier’s perspective too.
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I look forward to this story.
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Wow, Robbie, this was fantastic. Sounds like there’s a book in there somewhere? 🙂
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Thanks, Debby. This is part of my Boer War story. After Esther’s comments, I decided to include the English perspective as well.
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Fantastic!!!! 🙂
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Well done!
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Thank you
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Wonderful written, Robbie! Your historic influenced writing is superb. Thank you for sharing. Michael
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I am glad you liked this piece, Michael. I am enjoying the historical research for this book.
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Thank you so much, Robbie! Its really interesting.
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