Roberta Writes – Two poems for d’Verse and Story Chat #poetry

d’Verse – Celebrating groundhog day

Frank is d’Verse’s host for today and this is his prompt: Had enough Arctic cold? Buried under unseasonable snow? Or, for those living south of the equator, are you enjoying an arid summer? Well, whatever your situation, you might have heard about a certain rodent prognostication. Frank Tassone, here, & honored to be your host for another Haibun Monday, where we blend prose and haiku together. Today, let’s celebrate an American, weather-predicting tradition with Northern European roots: Groundhog’s Day.

You can join in the d’Verse challenge here: https://dversepoets.com/2025/02/03/haibun-monday-2-3-25-celebrating-groundhog-day/

You can find Frank’s poem here: https://frankjtassone.com/2025/02/03/groundhog-night/

As I live in southern Africa and it is summer here and we don’t have Groundhog’s Day, I have Africanised the prompt and incorporated two Zulu mythological creatures that bring the rain, thunder and lightening. In South Africa we get rain during late spring and summer and nothing at all during late autumn and winter. We can go up to eight months in a normal year without rain so by the time it arrives, we are desperate for relief from the heat and dryness.

The Forsaken

The angry sun savaged the land. Pouring its heat down onto the earth that cracked and broke under the relentless assault. The cattle grew thin, sharp ribs poking through their scraggy hides, while clouds of flies buzzed around their dry eyes and mouths. The crops withered in the fields and the people lay lethargic and parched inside their thatched huts. The milk in the breasts of the young mothers dried up and the babies cried themselves into early graves.

Unkulunkulu — “The One Who Carries Heavy Blows”, also called Rainbull, kept his mighty horns pointed at the sky, forcing the clouds to withhold their rain. He watched the daily passage of the boiling sun across the sky and dreamed about the cloudless nights when the bright stars performed undisturbed against a velvety blackness.

One scorching day, he shook his massive head and his horns accidently pointed towards the land below. The opportunistic rain seized the moment and flooded down in sheets accompanied by Impundulu, Lightening Bird, who summonsed thunder and lightening through the force of its wings and sharp talons.

The parched earth, unable to absorb the deluge, regurgitated the water creating flash floods across the land. People, animals, trees, and bushes all disappeared into the swirling brown whirlpool while Unkulunkulu, faced with his gross neglect, stamped his great hooves and cried pools of tears.

Unkulunkulu

Why have you forsaken us?

Direct your horns well

If you are interested in the Zuly Rainbull myth, you can read it here: https://medium.com/mythology-journal/the-spectacular-story-of-zenzele-and-the-rain-bull-0732de860a33

Last August, TC and I visited Jaci’s Treehouse Lodge in Madikwe Game Reserve. These pictures demonstrate how dry and dead everything looks at that time of your in this part of the world:

Picture caption: Warthog foraging among dried grasses and sticks
Picture caption: Buffalo heading to the man-made waterhole. They rely on artificially created water holes during the winter.
Picture caption: Buffalo on the move and stirring up the dust
Picture caption: Another picture of the buffs in a cloud of dust.

Story Chat

Talented writer, Marsha Ingrao, is the brain behind the innovative Story Chat series of blog posts. Story Chat involves the submission of a story or a poem which is published on Marsha’s blog, Always Write, and open to constructive discussion by her blog supporters. It is a most informative and interesting process and well worth considering for all poets and writers. You can find out more about Story Chat and find the schedule and submission process here: https://alwayswrite.blog/2024/11/22/story-chat-2025-schedule/

Marsha was kind enough to publish my poem, Invisible People, as part of her Poetry Day for Story Chat Digest 2025.

Roberta Writes – d’Verse Quadrille #216 and OpenLinkNight #377 #poetry #aloes

I am catching up today and posting poems for two d’Verse prompts.

The first one is OpenLinkNight #377 which offers the following picture as inspiration for a poem:

Picture caption: Gertrude Abercrombie’s painting

You can join in this prompt here: https://dversepoets.com/2025/01/30/openlinknight-377/

Mind Map

In her head

Her life

A mind map

It’s two main areas

Enclosed rectangles

Joined by gossamer threads

Fine but strong

To smaller contained squares

Work

Broken down into engagements

Engagements broken down into tasks

Tasks assigned to colleagues

Family

Each member

A different shape

Their problems

As different

As their various forms

Health

An inverted triangle

A reflection of balance

Or not

Between the other areas

It’s threads elastic

That stretch and stretch

Until they start to fray

Around the edges

She sits

Inside a circle

Formed by disconnected dashes

Her hands tightly griping

Those slippery silver threads

The second poem is a quadrille consisting of exactly 44 words and containing the word hint. You can read other poets’ poems here: https://dversepoets.com/2025/01/27/quadrille-216-can-you-take-a-hint/

Mist Warriors

Clothed in mist

The spirits of warriors

Sway and dance

To the beat of the rain

Their presence visible on aloes

Dripping from broad, green leaves

An arrow of light

Thrusts through the clouds

Turning the drops gold

A hint of the coming routing

These are some of the aloes we saw during our recent trip to Babanango Game Reserve. These photographs were taken after a cloudburst followed by drizzle for a few hours.

Picture caption: It was a misty, moisty morning.
Picture caption: Four Mountain Aloes
Picture caption: Two Somalian aloes (I think)
Picture caption: This is also an aloe but I couldn’t identify what kind
Picture: Spiny tree cactus (yes, I know it’s not an aloe …)
Picture caption: Thicket Gasteria
Picture caption: Carion flower
Picture caption: Aloe Vera
Picture caption: Candelabra tree

I hope you enjoyed this tour of the garden at the lodge.

Roberta Writes – Three in one: Esther Chilton’s prompt, Reena’s Xploration and What do you see? #poetry #painting

Esther Chilton’s Writing Prompt

Esther Chilton’s prompt is beauty. You can join in here: https://estherchilton.co.uk/2025/01/22/writing-prompts-49/. It worked beautifully in tandem with my latest watercolour painting.

Beauty (shadorma)

Young beauties

Skin smooth rose petals

Lips plump fruit

Hair fine silk

Life a freshly planted field

Just waiting for rain

Picture caption: My watercolour painting – Beauties

Reena’s Xploration Challenge #365

Reena has posted a YT short about not letting others sap your energy as her prompt. You can join in here: https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2025/01/23/reenas-xploration-challenge-365/

Energy suck (shadorma)

Parasites

Suck your energy

Feel it flow

Directly

From your heart and soul to theirs

Vampirical feast

What do you see #273

Sadje has posted this picture as her prompt:

The beach cafe (rhyming verse)

The sun blazes down

the beach simmers with heat,

my brother moans and whines

as it burns our feet

***

We dash for the door

and burst into the cool

an oasis in the desert

like diving into a pool

***

In the beach cafe

decor simple and plain,

from the heat we shelter

before we go insane

***

From it’s windows we watach

bodies frying on the sand

brown, white, and black

they all try to get tanned

***

Stretched out and exposed

shining with oil

a strange way to unwind

from your daily toil

***

We gulp down our drinks

wonderfully wet and cold,

staying out of the sun

for once we do as we’re told

You can join in Sadje’s prompt here: https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2025/01/27/what-do-you-see-273-27-jan-2025/

Roberta Writes – d’Verse: Positivity through negation #poetry

Bjorn is the host of this interesting prompt to use negation in poetry. You can join in here: https://dversepoets.com/2025/01/23/meet-the-bar-positively-through-negation/

You can read Bjorn’s poem here: https://brudberg.me/2025/01/23/what-it-is/

I have made an attempt based on how I understood this prompt. If you don’t like spiders STOP here.

I used a quote from Shakespeare’s Midsummer Night’s Dream which reflects spiders in a negative light. I have then flipped this idea in the second half of the poem.

In case you’ve forgotten, Puck, the mischievous servant to the fairy king in this play, is tasked with anointing Titania’s eyelids with the juice from a flower which will serve as a magic potion.

The Weaver

I scrabble backwards

Scrubbing shreds of sticky web

From my mouth and eyes

My Midsummer Night’s Dream forest walk

In tatters, just like the spider web

“Weaving spiders come not here

Hence, you long legged spiders, hence”

I invoke the charm of protection

From venomous arachnids

Out of the corner of my eye

I see a spectacular creation

A complex structure of threads

Glimmering in the golden light

Diamond-like rain drops clinging

At intervals along each lengthily seam

At the centre, sits the weaver

Slender red legs spread out

Around a distinctly marked abdomen

Like a queen on her throne

She eagerly awaits a banquet

Is her beauty real, or have I been bewitched

By magical floral juice upon my eyelids

“Tell me Puck? Is this vision real?

Or are you making mischief

With your enchanted love potion?”

Picture caption: Orb spider in its full web in the forest.
Picture caption: Close up of an orb spider in its web.

Roberta Writes: Book review – The Vampire of Kings Street by Asha Greyling #readingcommunity #fiction #vampires

The December holiday period and my Dad’s illness has put me behind with sharing my reviews. I am slowly catching up and I have a most interesting and unique vampire story to share with you today.

Picture caption: Cover of The Vampire of Kings Street by Asha Greyling featuring a coffin, two bats and a raven on a dark background with an entwining red patterning

What Amazon says

In this gothic debut novel, perfect for fans of Tread of Angels and Gail Carriger’s Soulless, Miss Radhika Dhingra, a newly minted lawyer in 19th century New York, never expected that her first client would be a vampire accused of murder.

Having a resident vampire is just the thing for upper-class New Yorkers–besides being a status symbol, they make excellent butlers or housekeepers. The only thing they require in return is a drop or two of blood and a casket to shut out the dawn’s early light. 

Tolerated by society only if they follow a strict set of rules, vampires are seen as “less than”–and as the daughter of immigrants, Radhika knows firsthand how this feels. Accused of murder, her undead client Mr. Evelyn More, knows that the cards are stacked against him.

With the help of a journalist friend and a diminutive detective inspector, Miss Dhingra sets out to prove her client’s innocence and win his freedom. Failure will mean Mr. More’s death, the end of her dreams of becoming a successful attorney, and the loss of the vampire Miss Dhingra has begun to call her friend.

Offering an alternative paranormal history, delightful characters, and insightful social commentary, The Vampire of Kings Street will thrill readers of Deanna Rayburn and Rebecca Roanhorse. 

My review

I enjoy vampire folklore and mythology and through this book had a unique and interesting take on vampires. Far from having the upper hand, vampires have descended into being wards of wealthy families who ‘host’ the vampire in exchange for services. Essentially, vampires who were previously hunted down and killed by vampire slayers, have evolved into ancient and immortal servants to the wealthy.

This story starts with Evelyn More, vampire ward to a wealthy and powerful family called Frost, calling on the dilapidated offices of Miss Radhika Dhingra. Radhika is an interesting character. The daughter of a couple who’d immigrated from South India, she had chosen to put herself through a college focused on uplifting women and gaining qualification as a lawyer. Naturally, due to her heritage, Radhika had not gained employment with the well-known and powerful firm of attorneys that all lawyers dreamed of working for and had decided to try and build her own practice. Mr More is seeking legal advice and despite her misgivings at acting for a vampire, she is excited to have her first client. Radhika connects to Mr More as vampires are heavily discriminated against by society and have limited legal rights. I thought Radhika’s internal conflict about the reputational risks of acting for a being even more disadvantaged than herself, and the enticement of the money, her first case, and also her desire to stay true to her own beliefs and moral values was fascinating. Radhika decides to go ahead and represent Mr More although he has not as yet committed any crime. Mr More is engaging her on the expectation that a crime would be committed that he would be blamed for due to circumstantial evidence.

I enjoyed the character of Radhika very much. I was pleased she stood up for her beliefs and I thought she developed nicely over the course of the story, as both a lawyer and a person. She demonstrated bravery in difficult circumstances and also determination and grit.

Mr More is an ancient being and has been with the Frost family for centuries. The family is not as it initially appears to be and there are lots of egos, desires, and discord at play. I disliked the family matriarch, as I was intended to, and resented her snooty and ungrateful behavior. Sadly, I thought Mrs Frost was entirely believable. As the book unfolds, Mr More’s background and how he became a vampire unfolds as a truly tragic story. His backstory gives a lot of insight into who he is and why he is both loved and hated by various characters in the book, both vampirical and otherwise.

The author introduces some unique and intriguing ideas around blood, both human and vampire, and I enjoyed these innovations on the traditional vampire story very much.

In summary, if you enjoy unique slants on mythical creatures and an entertaining story, this book will appeal to you.

You can purchase The Vampire of Kings Street by Asha Greyling from Amazon US here: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/163910867X

Roberta Writes – In Touch With Nature: The Secretary Bird

I am excited to be kicking off In Touch with Nature, 2025 with a post about the Secretary Bird, Southern Africa’s most unusual bird of prey.

Thanks for hosting, Kaye Lynne Booth.

Roberta Writes – d’Verse, Finding the Light #dverse #prosery

The prompt: Write a piece of prose, fiction or non-fiction, up to 144-words, using the line:

“where can we find light in this never-ending shade?”
–From Amanda Gorman, “The Hill We Climb”

You can join in here: https://dversepoets.com/2025/01/20/prosery-finding-the-light/. Thank you, Merril: https://merrildsmith.org/2025/01/20/prosery-galaxies-of-hope/

The Light

The forest sweltered in the heat. Droplets oozed from the dense undergrowth and the loamy, waterlogged soil squelched beneath our sneakered feet. The air lay heavily on us, coating our skins with slickness. Our lungs sucked in boiled syrup, thick and sticky in the gloomy twilight beneath the canopy.

Picture caption: Walking through the forest in 38C heat

All around us, the trees formed a closely packed barrier, forcing us to wallow on through the mud. Snaking tendrils, moist and slimy, slyly pulled our hair and sneakily wrapped around our ankles while the cicadas blasted encouragement. The noise rang in our ears.

Picture caption: This tree had long mossy tendrils

“I need some sun … and fresh air,” Bill muttered. “Where can we find light in this never-ending shade?”

Picture caption: This tree had a tangle of entwined tendrils

The trees did not deign to answer. The cicadas screamed laughter.

On we trudged, eyes downcast, muscles quivering.

The cicadas fell silent. Glancing around, we saw dappled sunlight ahead.

The Sound of the Forest YT video:

And beyond the trees lay The Grotto:

Picture caption: A beautiful rainbow in the pool at the bottom of the waterfall

Three videos of inside The Grotto. It was very wet, with water sparkling on the rock walls and undergrowth. There were also two waterfalls. You can hear them in the last to YT shorts.

Roberta Writes – Reblog: Book review of And the Grave Awaits

Thank you to talented author and blogger, Toni Pike, for this wonderful review of my short story collection, And the Grave Awaits.

Toni has a marvelous selection of books in the thriller, women’s fiction, and children’s books genres. I’ve read several of her books across all of the genres and loved all of them.

Roberta Writes – Book review: Too Much Fun to Be Legal by Nolcha Fox and Barbara Leonhard #poetry #poetrycommunity #bookreview

Picture caption: Book cover of Too Much Fun to Be Legal featuring people in foxes’ costumes

What Amazon says

Nolcha and Barbara decided to collaborate after Nolcha’s submission attachments to Barbara were mysteriously eaten by computer gremlins. Those gremlins were the topic of their first collaboration. It’s been so much fun to work together, it shouldn’t be legal.

My review

Too Much Fun to Be Legal is an engaging collection of witty, slightly sarcastic, and highly engaging poems by talented poets, Nolcha Fox and Barbara Leonhard. The poems are all freestyle and are written as alternate paragraph contributions by each poet. It is amazing how seamlessly the paragraphs fit together to create poems that flow perfectly. The poetry is highly imaginative and yet relatable and is filled with descriptions of daily life gone awry and the trials and tribulations of aging, which will have you nodding your head in understanding.

A few poetry extracts to demonstrate my commentary above.

Extracts from Diminishing:
Barbara’s contribution:
“Otherwise, I’m a monkey,
scaling shelves at the supermarket,
or using the grabber tool I was given
after my hip replacement
to snag containers”

Nolcha’s contribution:
“Supermarket shelves fell down
last time I tried to reach the Spam.
Canned goods, bottles, scattered,
shattered down Aisle 3 and 4.
Now the market manager
won’t let me shop without escort.
I just ride electric carts,
let someone else
do all the work.”

Extract from Freedom of the Body:
“Unshackle me from
pantyhose and heels,
from suits and ties,
from heavy bags
and briefcases
filled with everything
important, so we think.
These costumes
only serve as weights
to keep a work desk
in its place.”

I thought this paragraph describing work attire and the greater attitude towards work was very thought provoking. We all need to remember that we work to live and not let work become our lives.

Memory loss is a very real part of aging. Sometimes the demons, Dementia and Alzheimer’s, raise their ugly heads and the memory loss becomes all encompassing. This extract from I’m looking, written by Barbara, subtly illustrates this particular symptom.

“Like the shards of my soul
lost in traumas.
Some left to haunt
old homes, playgrounds,
hospitals. How to rescue
those missing pieces
of my memory?”

If you enjoy relatable poetry that allows you to smile, or even laugh, at the inconveniences, annoyances and griefs of life, you will enjoy this brilliantly compiled collection.

Purchase Too Much Fun to Be Legal from Amazon US here: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0DC4RTRCR

Find Nolcha and Barbara

You can find more of Nolcha’s poetry on her blog here: https://writingaddiction2.wordpress.com/

You can find more of Barbara’s poetry on her blog here: https://extraordinarysunshineweaver.blog/

Roberta Writes – d’Verse: Lifeoff and Margins #poetry #dVerse

It seems quite amazing that I wrote these two poems early yesterday morning. So much has happened since then. My dad is in hospital and they have found a huge goitre (enlarged thyroid gland) which is pressing on parts of his brain and his lungs and heart. I will see how today unfolds as the doctor called me with some of the test results at 8pm last night. Anyhow, both of these poems are happy and uplifting.

Thank you to Dora for her ‘Diving into Margins’ prompt. You can join in here: https://dversepoets.com/2025/01/14/diving-into-margins/

Margins

I taught my children

To colour outside the lines

To write in the margins

To push all the boundaries

I taught my children to dance

Instead of walk

To see the pictures in the clouds

To translate them into poems,

Stories and innovative ideas

I taught my children to live

***

De Jackson‘s quadrille prompt is Liftoff. You can see what other poets have written here: https://dversepoets.com/2025/01/13/quadrille-215-ready-for-liftoff/

Linen

I wrestle the sheets onto the washing line

Sweet smells of lavender fabric softener

Filling my nostrils

A mischievous zephyr gently lifts them

They billow into full, white sails

Shocking the cat

Whose enquiring nose

Has just breached the corner

She runs

I laugh

Picture caption: Bald Eagle – coloured pencil drawing by Robbie Cheadle. Based on a photograph by Wayne Barnes from Tofino Photography. You can find Wayne’s beautiful photographs here: https://tofinophotography.wordpress.com/