Roberta Writes – W3 #146 The Ladder #poetry

Picture caption: Photograph from Unsplash

This week’s W3 prompt is as follows:

THEME: Write a poem to encourage someone not to give up—urging them to persevere, try again, or push forward for just one more time or day;

STRUCTURE: Use no more than 11 lines;

Choose any form or rhyme scheme you prefer;

You can join in here: https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/02/12/w3-prompt-146-weave-written-weekly/

The ladder

You are climbing the final rungs on the high school ladder

It seemed to have no top, but now you can see

A new world of adulthood nearly within your reach

Your ladder has been a long and difficult clamber

Rungs were stretched apart, and you had to jump

Some parts were oiled, and you slipped back some way

Obstacles blocked your climb, and you used picks and ropes

Some rungs were weak and broke when you stood on them

You got splinters in your hands and fingers from holding on

But you have prevailed, and climbed your extended ladder

I’m right here behind you, pushing you upwards

Roberta Writes – d’Verse ‘From Your Valentine’ prompt #poetry #d’Verse

Sanaa has provide a lovely Valentine’s prompt for d’Verse, as follows:

1- Love Potions and Concoctions: Write a poem as a recipe for a love potion. Throw in some berries and cream, maybe a dash of cinnamon and chivalry. Tell us what love means to you.

2- Love Letters Through Time: Write a poem in the form of a love letter. It can be addressed to yourself, to someone special and/or in memory of a person who has passed.

3- Love in a Digital Age: Bring love into the 21st century by exploring the dynamics of modern relationships. I am referring to the age of social media, dating apps, and virtual connections. Let your poem decide whether technology enhances or complicates matters even further.

You can join in here: https://dversepoets.com/2025/02/11/poetics-from-your-valentine/

I’ve written a haiban for the love letter prompt.

“Love Letter” Necklace

Sphiwe held up the panelled “love letter” necklace she’d created for her young husband, BongiNkosi. The numerous beads glimmered in the strong summer light. BongiNkosi was working far away on a mine, and this intricately patterned artwork was a secret declaration of her enduring love.

Smiling, she thought back to the early days of their courtship when she was just fourteen years old. After she and BongiNkosi had agreed to proceed with a relationship, she’d fashioned a simple ucu (necklace) made of two strings of twisted white beads to which she’d attached one beaded white ring as a symbol of her virginity. Her iqhikiza (older sister) had presented the gift to her admirer on her behalf. A giggle escaped Sphiwe’s slightly parted lips as she remembered how BongiNkosi had rushed home to hang up a white handkerchief, announcing to the world that he was in love.

As their relationship progressed, Sphiwe had crafted other rings and a second love letter incorporating numerous red beads to demonstrate the evolution of her love and her longing. BongiNkosi had reciprocated by replacing the white handkerchief with a red one.

With one hand on her swollen belly, she kissed the necklace and laid it in a box, ready for travel. It would serve as a reminder of their love and his forthcoming fatherhood until the time was ripe for him to journey home for the birth of his first child.

Red for intense love

Yellow for fertility

Black for our marriage

You can read more about Zulu “Love Letter’ beaded necklaces here: https://artsandculture.google.com/story/uwXhzpYRaUm3JQ

Michael and I have a cute book for children about the Valentine Toffee Cupid.

Picture caption My Valentine Toffee Cupid. Working with toffee was an interesting challenge.
The cover of Sir Chocolate and the Valentine Toffee Cupid story book which is available from Amazon US here: https://www.amazon.com/Chocolate-Valentine-Toffee-Cupid-holidays-ebook/dp/B0BT9GBNHL

Roberta Writes – W3 poetry challenge #poetry

I am a little late for this challenge even though I had my poem written on Saturday. Thank you to David from Skeptics Kaddish for this great prompt. You can see what other poets have written here: https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/02/05/w3-prompt-145-weave-written-weekly/

Expectation Gap

People frequently let me down in life

Strife

becoming the name of the game

Blame

heaped like coals on my head

Dread

filling my heart and soul like lead

Bread

cannot always be broken to mend

Friend –

ships that dissolve into disillustionment

Disappointment

has occurred in every corner of my world

Curled

into tight bands around my heart

Darts

of anguish at kindness thrown back in my face

Grace

and courage no longer general life skills

On a happier note that this poem, I found this interesting flower in my cactus garden:

Picture caption: I thought the purple and yellow blossom was most unusual
Picture caption: the flower is really tall

Roberta Writes – Book reviews: Menagerie by Joan Hall and Slivers of Life by Beem Weeks #bookreviews #fiction #readingcommunity

Menagerie by Joan Hall

Picture caption: Book cover of Menagerie featuring a glowing streetlight against a dark background

What Amazon says

King’s. The Tower of London. Glass. What do these have in common?

Each is a famous menagerie.

While this Menagerie doesn’t focus on exotic animals, it does contain a collection of stories that explore various trials people face and how their reactions shape their worlds.

Survivors of a haunted bridge. Women who wait while their husbands fight a war. Former partners reuniting to solve a cold-case murder.

These are just three of the thirteen stories in this compendium, encompassing past and present, natural and supernatural, legend and reality. The genres and timelines are varied, but there’s a little something for everyone who enjoys reading about simpler times and small-town life.

My review

I am a fan of short stories as I like their concise use of words and fast pace. Of course, short stories still need to have a proper story line, and the reader needs to be grounded in the setting and engaged with the characters. This is not always easy to achieve in a short story format, but Joan Hall has managed to do it well in this interesting and well written collection of short stories.

This collection is varied and explores a number of topics and situations with the common thread of all being set in small towns in North America. The descriptions of life and relationships in small towns in the USA were fascinating for me as I have always lived in a big city. There was just enough detail to steep me in the setting without it bogging down the stories.

I enjoyed the large variety of characters, some of which are strong and enterprising women which I always value in a book. The characterisations demonstrate the author’s deep understanding of the type of people populating her stories and their thought patterns, way of life, and anxieties.

It is difficult to choose favourite stories from this collection as they are all engaging, but the following three stand out in my mind:

A Moment in Time: A dual timeline story set approximately 100 years apart and featuring two wars, two men fighting in the wars, and two young women waiting anxiously for the return of their men. I am partial to dual timeline stories and plots involving war, so this was right up my street.

Lone Wolf – A wonderful story of friendship between a wolf and a man and how they are able to help and care for each other.

Without a Trace – This story was filled with mystery and angst as the tale of a family that disappeared without a trace unfolds. As a person who moved continuously as a child, I related strongly to the main character, Rick, and his struggle to fit into a new school environment and manage the continuous changes to his life.

If you enjoy short stories with interesting and varied storylines and great characterisations, you will love this collection.

Purchase Menagerie from Amazon US here: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0BRL4Y5NL

Slivers of Life by Beem Weeks

Picture caption: Book cover of Shivers of Life by Beem Weeks featuring a face shape constructed of broken glass/mirror shards

What Amazon says

These twenty short stories are a peek into individual lives caught up in spectacular moments in time. Children, teens, mothers, and the elderly each have stories to share. Readers witness tragedy and fulfillment, love and hate, loss and renewal. Historical events become backdrops in the lives of ordinary people, those souls forgotten with the passage of time. Beem Weeks tackles diverse issues running the gamut from Alzheimer’s disease to civil rights, abandonment to abuse, from young love to the death of a child. Long-hidden secrets and notions of revenge unfold at the promptings of rich and realistic characters; plot lines often lead readers into strange and dark corners. Within Slivers of Life, Weeks proves that everybody has a story to tell-and no two are ever exactly alike.

My review

Slivers of Life is an apt title for this collection of short stories that cover a wide variety of topics and colourful characters of different ages, occupations, and intentions. Despite the short length of the stories, the author has created compelling characters whose behaviours, although not always exemplary, are very relatable.

I find the best way I can review a short story collection is by sharing insights into a few of the stories that have stayed with me the longest. My most memorable stories are as follows;

A Match Met – an intriguing peep into betrayal and revenge that will have your wondering whether the end justifies the means.

Lost Boy – a truly compelling read about a grumpy old man who finds fault with the noise generated by the little boy next door. Mr Spellman does everything he can, internally and externally to stop the irritation, but sometimes what we think we want turns out to be the opposite.

Night Flight – a poignant look at life for young boys being raised by a single parent and the pressure it puts on both the parent and the child. The story delves into the ease with which rejected and/or neglected youngsters can slip into crime and drug taking. There is a supernatural element which leaves you wondering if it actually happened or not. Was the narrator reliable?

And a little child shall lead them – this story talks to the invisibility of homeless and unfortunate people and the judgement that more successful people immediately pass on them due to their circumstances. A poignant story of caring.

Remaining Ruth – a peep into depression, teenage angst and cutting. Very scary for any parent who struggles to reach and understand their teenage child.

On the whole, an intriguing and well written collection of short stories that I really enjoyed reading.

Purchase Slivers of Life from Amazon US here: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1936442205

Roberta Writes – d’Verse Reimagining the ordinary and street art on Ginza Street #poetry #streetart #Africananimals

When I visited Japan in December last year, we went to see the art shop fronts on Ginza Street. I shared about this visit here: https://roberta-writes.com/2024/12/21/roberta-writes-thursday-doors-tokyo-store-front-scenes-tokyo-christmas-thursdaydoors/

On Ginza Street, I came across some lovely street art and took pictures of it for blogging friend, Resa, who loves street art. You can find Resa’s most recent street art post here: https://graffitiluxandmurals.com/2025/01/26/muhammad-ali/

I am sharing that street art today and also using it as a jumping off point for my contribution to Dora’s Reimagining d’Verse poetry challenge which you can join in here: https://dversepoets.com/2025/02/04/poetics-reimagining-the-familiar/

You can read Dora’s poem here: https://pilgrimdreams.com/2025/02/04/washdays/

Picture caption: Street art on Ginza Street, Tokyo – a Cape buffalo

When I appear on Ginza Street

I am a male Cape buffalo

I roam the plains of southern Africa

Endlessly seeking fodder

Which I consume faster than most African herbivores

Due to my wide row of incisor teeth

And deft tongue

My coat is dark brown, and

I have a set of majestic horns

Called a ‘boss’

They come together in front

To form a protective shield

My temper is unpredictable

And I cannot be tamed

Except when I appear on Ginza Street

Here, I assimilate

Becoming one with the local culture

I evolve into a showpiece

Wearing Joseph’s coat of many colours

My heavy front and wide hooves reduce

My boss erodes, shrinking as I conform

With bowed head and downcast eyes

There is no need to fear me

When I appear on Ginza Street

***

I am a male bush elephant

I wander the savannahs of Africa

Relentlessly grazing

The world’s largest land mammal

I uproot massive trees

Stripping them of their leaves and bark

Leaving behind much devastation

I use my large, curved incisors

Known as tusks

To dig, communicate, and for defense

My thick hide is grey

But I cover it with mud

The colour of the surrounding earth

I am dangerous when provoked

Except when I appear on Ginza Street

When I’m on Ginza Street

I must blend in with my surroundings

And acquire an arty look and feel

My skin becomes dappled

Resplendent in a variety

Of colours and shapes

My tusks diminish

Choosing obscurity

Along with my honey coloured eyes

There is no need to stand back

When I make my appearance

On Ginza Street

This was some other street art we saw on Ginza Street:

Picture caption: Woman dressed in yellow with a large shopping bag
Picture caption: Woman smartly attired, out for a day’s shopping
Picture caption: A multi-coloured collage of different objects of interest

Roberta Writes – Two poems for d’Verse and Story Chat #poetry

d’Verse – Celebrating groundhog day

Frank is d’Verse’s host for today and this is his prompt: Had enough Arctic cold? Buried under unseasonable snow? Or, for those living south of the equator, are you enjoying an arid summer? Well, whatever your situation, you might have heard about a certain rodent prognostication. Frank Tassone, here, & honored to be your host for another Haibun Monday, where we blend prose and haiku together. Today, let’s celebrate an American, weather-predicting tradition with Northern European roots: Groundhog’s Day.

You can join in the d’Verse challenge here: https://dversepoets.com/2025/02/03/haibun-monday-2-3-25-celebrating-groundhog-day/

You can find Frank’s poem here: https://frankjtassone.com/2025/02/03/groundhog-night/

As I live in southern Africa and it is summer here and we don’t have Groundhog’s Day, I have Africanised the prompt and incorporated two Zulu mythological creatures that bring the rain, thunder and lightening. In South Africa we get rain during late spring and summer and nothing at all during late autumn and winter. We can go up to eight months in a normal year without rain so by the time it arrives, we are desperate for relief from the heat and dryness.

The Forsaken

The angry sun savaged the land. Pouring its heat down onto the earth that cracked and broke under the relentless assault. The cattle grew thin, sharp ribs poking through their scraggy hides, while clouds of flies buzzed around their dry eyes and mouths. The crops withered in the fields and the people lay lethargic and parched inside their thatched huts. The milk in the breasts of the young mothers dried up and the babies cried themselves into early graves.

Unkulunkulu — “The One Who Carries Heavy Blows”, also called Rainbull, kept his mighty horns pointed at the sky, forcing the clouds to withhold their rain. He watched the daily passage of the boiling sun across the sky and dreamed about the cloudless nights when the bright stars performed undisturbed against a velvety blackness.

One scorching day, he shook his massive head and his horns accidently pointed towards the land below. The opportunistic rain seized the moment and flooded down in sheets accompanied by Impundulu, Lightening Bird, who summonsed thunder and lightening through the force of its wings and sharp talons.

The parched earth, unable to absorb the deluge, regurgitated the water creating flash floods across the land. People, animals, trees, and bushes all disappeared into the swirling brown whirlpool while Unkulunkulu, faced with his gross neglect, stamped his great hooves and cried pools of tears.

Unkulunkulu

Why have you forsaken us?

Direct your horns well

If you are interested in the Zuly Rainbull myth, you can read it here: https://medium.com/mythology-journal/the-spectacular-story-of-zenzele-and-the-rain-bull-0732de860a33

Last August, TC and I visited Jaci’s Treehouse Lodge in Madikwe Game Reserve. These pictures demonstrate how dry and dead everything looks at that time of your in this part of the world:

Picture caption: Warthog foraging among dried grasses and sticks
Picture caption: Buffalo heading to the man-made waterhole. They rely on artificially created water holes during the winter.
Picture caption: Buffalo on the move and stirring up the dust
Picture caption: Another picture of the buffs in a cloud of dust.

Story Chat

Talented writer, Marsha Ingrao, is the brain behind the innovative Story Chat series of blog posts. Story Chat involves the submission of a story or a poem which is published on Marsha’s blog, Always Write, and open to constructive discussion by her blog supporters. It is a most informative and interesting process and well worth considering for all poets and writers. You can find out more about Story Chat and find the schedule and submission process here: https://alwayswrite.blog/2024/11/22/story-chat-2025-schedule/

Marsha was kind enough to publish my poem, Invisible People, as part of her Poetry Day for Story Chat Digest 2025.

Roberta Writes – d’Verse Quadrille #216 and OpenLinkNight #377 #poetry #aloes

I am catching up today and posting poems for two d’Verse prompts.

The first one is OpenLinkNight #377 which offers the following picture as inspiration for a poem:

Picture caption: Gertrude Abercrombie’s painting

You can join in this prompt here: https://dversepoets.com/2025/01/30/openlinknight-377/

Mind Map

In her head

Her life

A mind map

It’s two main areas

Enclosed rectangles

Joined by gossamer threads

Fine but strong

To smaller contained squares

Work

Broken down into engagements

Engagements broken down into tasks

Tasks assigned to colleagues

Family

Each member

A different shape

Their problems

As different

As their various forms

Health

An inverted triangle

A reflection of balance

Or not

Between the other areas

It’s threads elastic

That stretch and stretch

Until they start to fray

Around the edges

She sits

Inside a circle

Formed by disconnected dashes

Her hands tightly griping

Those slippery silver threads

The second poem is a quadrille consisting of exactly 44 words and containing the word hint. You can read other poets’ poems here: https://dversepoets.com/2025/01/27/quadrille-216-can-you-take-a-hint/

Mist Warriors

Clothed in mist

The spirits of warriors

Sway and dance

To the beat of the rain

Their presence visible on aloes

Dripping from broad, green leaves

An arrow of light

Thrusts through the clouds

Turning the drops gold

A hint of the coming routing

These are some of the aloes we saw during our recent trip to Babanango Game Reserve. These photographs were taken after a cloudburst followed by drizzle for a few hours.

Picture caption: It was a misty, moisty morning.
Picture caption: Four Mountain Aloes
Picture caption: Two Somalian aloes (I think)
Picture caption: This is also an aloe but I couldn’t identify what kind
Picture: Spiny tree cactus (yes, I know it’s not an aloe …)
Picture caption: Thicket Gasteria
Picture caption: Carion flower
Picture caption: Aloe Vera
Picture caption: Candelabra tree

I hope you enjoyed this tour of the garden at the lodge.

Roberta Writes – Three in one: Esther Chilton’s prompt, Reena’s Xploration and What do you see? #poetry #painting

Esther Chilton’s Writing Prompt

Esther Chilton’s prompt is beauty. You can join in here: https://estherchilton.co.uk/2025/01/22/writing-prompts-49/. It worked beautifully in tandem with my latest watercolour painting.

Beauty (shadorma)

Young beauties

Skin smooth rose petals

Lips plump fruit

Hair fine silk

Life a freshly planted field

Just waiting for rain

Picture caption: My watercolour painting – Beauties

Reena’s Xploration Challenge #365

Reena has posted a YT short about not letting others sap your energy as her prompt. You can join in here: https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2025/01/23/reenas-xploration-challenge-365/

Energy suck (shadorma)

Parasites

Suck your energy

Feel it flow

Directly

From your heart and soul to theirs

Vampirical feast

What do you see #273

Sadje has posted this picture as her prompt:

The beach cafe (rhyming verse)

The sun blazes down

the beach simmers with heat,

my brother moans and whines

as it burns our feet

***

We dash for the door

and burst into the cool

an oasis in the desert

like diving into a pool

***

In the beach cafe

decor simple and plain,

from the heat we shelter

before we go insane

***

From it’s windows we watach

bodies frying on the sand

brown, white, and black

they all try to get tanned

***

Stretched out and exposed

shining with oil

a strange way to unwind

from your daily toil

***

We gulp down our drinks

wonderfully wet and cold,

staying out of the sun

for once we do as we’re told

You can join in Sadje’s prompt here: https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2025/01/27/what-do-you-see-273-27-jan-2025/

Roberta Writes – d’Verse: Positivity through negation #poetry

Bjorn is the host of this interesting prompt to use negation in poetry. You can join in here: https://dversepoets.com/2025/01/23/meet-the-bar-positively-through-negation/

You can read Bjorn’s poem here: https://brudberg.me/2025/01/23/what-it-is/

I have made an attempt based on how I understood this prompt. If you don’t like spiders STOP here.

I used a quote from Shakespeare’s Midsummer Night’s Dream which reflects spiders in a negative light. I have then flipped this idea in the second half of the poem.

In case you’ve forgotten, Puck, the mischievous servant to the fairy king in this play, is tasked with anointing Titania’s eyelids with the juice from a flower which will serve as a magic potion.

The Weaver

I scrabble backwards

Scrubbing shreds of sticky web

From my mouth and eyes

My Midsummer Night’s Dream forest walk

In tatters, just like the spider web

“Weaving spiders come not here

Hence, you long legged spiders, hence”

I invoke the charm of protection

From venomous arachnids

Out of the corner of my eye

I see a spectacular creation

A complex structure of threads

Glimmering in the golden light

Diamond-like rain drops clinging

At intervals along each lengthily seam

At the centre, sits the weaver

Slender red legs spread out

Around a distinctly marked abdomen

Like a queen on her throne

She eagerly awaits a banquet

Is her beauty real, or have I been bewitched

By magical floral juice upon my eyelids

“Tell me Puck? Is this vision real?

Or are you making mischief

With your enchanted love potion?”

Picture caption: Orb spider in its full web in the forest.
Picture caption: Close up of an orb spider in its web.