Saana‘s challenge: The challenge is to write a poem inspired by the Poet and poem you have chosen. What emotions do they evoke in you?
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By way of context, I’ve had an idea in my head about writing a modernised version of Dante’s Inferno for some time. My idea is that it will speak to the Sixth Mass Extinction and global warming rather than politics and sins. Anyhow, when I saw Saana’s challenge I knew now was the time for me to make a start on this project. To this end, I bring you the first 60 lines of Canto 1 of my poetic saga as yet untitled.
If you don’t know Dante’s Inferno, he uses a rhyming scheme of A, B, A, B, C, D, E, F, E, F.
CANTO 1
I’d entered the middle part of life, my youth had fled
When I found myself in a desert, enduring brutal heat
The sun beat dreadfully upon my uncovered head
Sand burned harshly beneath my tender bare feet
How barren that desert was, parched and desolate
Terror gripped my heart and filled my mind
I was left wordless in the face of such grimness
Created by man’s endless selfishness and greed
I mourned Earth’s end in this horrifying starkness
From this burning inferno could I ever be freed 10
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How I arrived in this unfortunate place, an unknown
I’d always tried to fight for human and animal rights
For my love of flora and fauna I was quite renown
I intrinsically knew humanity had caused this blight
Yet, in the distance I could see a patch of dark green
Enticing me to wend my clumsy way in its direction
Slowly, I moved forward across the scorching sand
Verdant colours luring me with nature’s promise
Perhaps there was still hope for this empty land
Possibly I’d find a source of consolation and solace 20
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Blood dried in my veins; fluid leached from my eyes
I panted, an attempt to rid my body of excess heat
As the devil sun marched across the faded blue sky
The green haze remained, keeping me from defeat
Hope’s finger beckoning: inspiring and motivating
A pledge of fluid to sooth my sunbaked body
Bleached bones created hazardous obstacles
Hosting clumps of discoloured leather-like flesh
Defeated by devastating climate change battles
Was there any way wildlife could start afresh? 30
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Ghostly outlines slowly took on solid shapes
Large rocks thrusting out from sandy cradles
A girl child appeared, gorging on fat, black grapes
Vanishing as I approached, like a myth or fable
This further disturbance of the natural world
Distressed my mind near to its snapping point
If there was another option, I’d have retreated
But lack of water had left me in a poor state
I could only go on, I was physically defeated
Shoulders straight, I walked towards my fate 40
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A quivering in my nose – water I could smell
Softening of the dry air, my lungs embraced
Sweet humidity filling each bronchial cell
Then, I saw a fearful sight, my pulse again raced
The white fur of a honey badger behind a bush
Toughest and most aggressive animal in the world
Staggering backward in horror, my gasp escaped
As not one, but two, creatures blocked my path
Pair of tiny cheetah cubs; I laughed at my mistake
Then mom appeared, would I face her wrath? 50
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In a voice, unused to forming words, she spoke
“Here you are, at last. We’ve been waiting hours
There’s a sandstorm brewing. Hurry, or we’ll choke”
We set of at once towards a thick clump of flowers
Mom almost gliding, her five cubs bouncing after
My admiration had no limits for this fastest of cats
Also, the most endangered of the big cat population
What’s happening, I wondered, what does it all mean
The desert had indicated the world’s damnation
Was there a chance salvation could still intervene? 60