This poem was going to be for this week’s W3 prompt but then I realised I hadn’t followed the instructions properly. My 1st and 3rd and 2nd and 4th lines don’t rhyme. I like what I’ve created so I decided not to change it and just publish it outside of the challenge. The prompt word is Beach Balls and I’ve used a syllabic count of 5/8/6/10/6 for each stanza.
Dolphin Display
Beautiful creatures
Elegantly pair with water
Agilely performing
Complicated aerobics to music
How high they jump and twist
***
Breathlessly we watch
Amazed at their dexterity
Lithesome bodies gliding
Luxuriating in the rapt attention
Sensational showing
These are a few ocean scenes from our recent trip to St Lucia. We visited in July which is our coldest month of the year. This is the beach at Cape Vidal.
I was interested in the fact that there is a lot of black mixed in with the white sea sand. The black is titanium and not oil as I had originally thought.
Today, I am delighted to introduce you to talented author, Andrew Joyce. Andrew is relaunching his award winning novel, Redemption, which sounds like an excellent read for people who enjoyed the original The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn and The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain.
Picture caption: Redemption by Andrew Joyce banner
Blurb
Three men come together in the town of Redemption, Colorado, each for his own purpose.
Huck Finn is a famous lawman not afraid to use his gun to protect the weak. He has come to right a terrible wrong.
After his wife’s death, Tom Sawyer does not want to live anymore; he has come to die.
The third man, the Laramie Kid, a killer Huck and Tom befriended years earlier has come to kill a man.
For these three men Death is a constant companion. For these three men it is their last chance for redemption.
Click on the book cover below for the Amazon US purchase link. The book is available as an ebook, paperback and an audio book.
Picture caption: Book cover featuring two men riding horses against a yellow sunset
Editorial Reviews of Redemption
“Mr. Joyce has taken a slice of American History and expanded upon it in a most interesting fashion. By calling up the ghosts of Louie L’Amour & the early works of Elmore Leonard, Huck & Tom grippingly move through the Civil war era and beyond, carrying the enraptured reader along with them. I’m now waiting for this author’s sequel.” — Grady Harp, San Francisco Book Review
“Andrew Joyce is a genius in bringing two beloved characters back to life. Redemption: The Further Adventures of Huck Finn and Tom Sawyer is destined to be a five-star best-seller. I was thrilled to have the opportunity of reuniting with two well-loved characters from my youth. I loved Tom and Huck then and I love them even more today as written about by the brilliant Andrew Joyce. All I can say is thank you, thank you, thank you for a few hours of wonderful reading.” — Trudi LoPreto for Readers’ Favorite
“We gladly give REDEMPTION five stars and wish Andrew Joyce a bounty of sales as he’s written a book that does Twain and the characters he created, Finn and Sawyer, proud.” — L. Avery Brown, Magnolia Blossom Review
“Andrew Joyce has done an amazing job capturing the essence and authenticity of this era complete with old fashioned slang and heroics throughout the story that kept the reader engaged and very entertained. What I loved about this book were the admirable morals and values of the main characters, they each had a real down to earth, genuine, true ‘good’ heroic nature about them. Witnessing their characters mature, grow, and develop throughout the story was inspiring.” — Book Gossips
“Could not put this book down from beginning to end!” —Ron K., Amazon Reviewer
My review of Mahoney by Andrew Joyce
I have not yet read Redemption, but it is on my audio book TBR. My mother and I both thoroughly enjoyed Mahoney by Andrew Joyce and this is my review of that book:
I listened to the audio book of Mahoney, narrated by Michael R.L. Kern. The narrator did a great job with this book and had the right voice and inflections of tone for this particular story.
Mahoney is a fascinating story of the lives of Devin Mahoney, a poverty stricken farming tenant in Ireland who travels to America during the famine, and his son and grandson.
This book is well researched and shares intricate details relating to a variety of contraversial topics including: the lives of the tenant farmers in Ireland during the family and the shocking treatment they received at the hands of their English overlords, the journey by sea of Irish immigrants to America on board the “death ships”, life for the Irish immigrants on their arrival in the “promised land”, the circumstances of the civil war in America, life in the wild west of America for a young man from the East and his journey to becoming a marshal and an incredible fast gun, the life of the wealthy in New York before the Great Depression, the plight of the poor during the Great Depression and the circumstances of African Americans living in the south during the late 1930s and 1940s.
The list above gives a taste of the insights and depth and breath of this wonderful book which I enjoyed tremendously. Although I had some knowledge of most of these periods in history, the level of detail shared in this book, and the way the author wove the history seamlessly into the story, resulted in a great learning experience for me, together with a fantastic and engaging story.
Mahoney is divided into three parts with each part devoted to the development of one generation of the Mahoney family. There are elements of high adventure and romance in each character’s specific tale.
My favourite character was Devin because he was so spirited and determined. He overcame incredible difficulties to travel to America and start a new life there. The revelations about life on board the ships used to transport Irish immigrants to America were an eye opener, as was Devin’s positive attitude and determination to do whatever it took to succeed. He worked hard labouring jobs in order to establish his reputation as a solid and reliable worker and I found that very admirable. I also loved his love interest, Mary, who aside from being beautiful, was also resourceful and hard working. Their romance was sweet and made me feel good.
Dillon also has an amazing life but there were some things about his character that were a bit unfortunate in the long run. This didn’t make him less interesting and enjoyable as a main character but it did set the scene for his son, the third generation.
It is often said the the first generation builds everything and the third generation destroys it and, initially, this would seem to be the case in this book. David Mahoney, however, evolves into a most unusual and dedicated man and his story is also unusual and revealing about certain aspects of life in America.
This book is well written and highly entertaining. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys history and books about human drama, with a touch of romance thrown in for good measure.
Click on the book cover for the Amazon US purchase link:
Picture caption: Book cover of Mahoney which features three men of varying ages against a sunset
About Andrew Joyce
Picture caption: Author picture of Andrew Joyce
Andrew Joyce left home at seventeen to hitchhike throughout the US, Canada, and Mexico. He wouldn’t return from his journey until years later when he decided to become a writer. Mr. Joyce has written seven books and 143 short stories. One of which won the Writing Spirit Award for best short story of 2011. His first novel, Redemption: The Further Adventures of Huck Finn and Tom Sawyer, was awarded the Editors’ Choice Award for Best Western of 2013. A subsequent novel, Yellow Hair, received the Book of the Year award from Just Reviews and Best Historical Fiction of 2016 from Colleen’s Book Reviews.
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Picture caption: Cover of Vampire of the Midnight Sun featuring the sun rising over a desolate landscape
What Amazon says
Priscilla Bettis draws on real life experiences in the Alaska wilderness (grizzlies) and the Texas plains (wildfires) to pen these two short stories.
A vampire in Alaska. In ‘Vampire of the Midnight Sun,’ Frasier and his best friend, Billy, are stranded in the Alaskan wilderness after a rafting accident: grizzlies, arctic water, frozen nights, soggy tundra, no food, no matches, no civilization. And no one is coming to rescue them.
Plus Billy is convinced he’s a vampire. It’s a five-day hike to civilization. Billy claims he can only go three days without human blood.
Will the men survive the harsh Alaskan elements? If so, can Frasier survive Billy’s vampiric delusions, or will Frasier have to take his best friend’s life in order to save his own?
A showdown between an Old West cowboy and a fire witch. In ‘The Fire Witch and the Cowboy,’ Henderson is the yellow-bellied coward of Dusty Bend, Texas. His wife is ashamed of him. Kids tease him. And he’s terrified of wildfires.
But when a wildfire threatens Dusty Bend, it is Henderson who brokers a deal between the townfolk and the wealthy but formidable Widow Vandermeer, to use her resources in order to fight the fire.
“There will be sacrifices,” she says. If the widow learns Henderson’s decades-old secret, he might be the sacrifice.
Will Henderson grab his wife and run, leaving town while he can? Or will he stay and risk falling into Widow Vandermeer’s clutches?
Meanwhile, the wildfire grows closer…
(cover by Adrian Baldwin)
My review
This book comprises of two stories, both with unusual and deliciously creepy plots.
The first story is about two men, born and raised in Alaska, who like to hike in the wilderness. A series of unfortunate events result in their being stranded in a location that differs from their logged trail. With nearly all of their possessions lost, the friends must hike on until they reach the closest village. The larger and stronger of the pair, Billy or Vlad as he calls himself, claims that he is a vampire and can’t go for an extended period without human blood, a discussion that his companion, Frasier, who is suffering from an infection, finds highly improbable and annoying. The friends must find a way to work together if they want to survive the ordeal.
I really enjoyed the realistic descriptions of two men lost in the Alaskan wilderness and the difficulties they experience in hiking across the adverse terrain without their equipment. Frasier is the narrator and the combination of his deteriorating health and mental well being make him an unreliable narrator. As a result, the I was left uncertain as to whether the facts as reported by Frasier were entirely true.
The second story is about a pioneer with an unfortunate family connection and a terrible secret and a vengeful woman who has sold her soul to the devil. This story had an eerie and frightening tone so I knew terrible and ungodly events were going to occur early on in the story. The tone and foreshadowing did not disappoint and I thought this was an excellent piece of paranormal fiction.
People who enjoy clever paranormal stories with dark and foreboding tones will enjoy this book.
About Priscilla Bettis
Picture caption: Author picture of Priscilla Bettis. She has short hair, brown eyes and shows the smallest hint of a smile.
Priscilla Bettis read her first horror story, The Exorcist, when she was a little kid. She snuck the book from her parents’ den. The Exorcist scared Priscilla silly, and she was hooked on the power of the horror genre from that moment on.
Priscilla is an excellent swimmer, which is good because vampires are terrible swimmers.
Priscilla shares a home in the Northern Plains of Texas with her two-legged and four-legged family members.
During our recent trip to KwaZulu-Natal, we visited the Blood River Heritage Site.
This is what Wikipedia says about The Battle of Blood River:
The Battle of Blood River (16 December 1838) was fought on the bank of the Ncome River, in what is today KwaZulu-Natal, South Africa between 464 Voortrekkers (“Pioneers”), led by Andries Pretorius, and an estimated 10,000 to 15,000 Zulu. Estimations of casualties amounted to over 3,000 of King Dingane’s soldiers dead, including two Zulu princes competing with Prince Mpande for the Zulu throne. Three Voortrekker commando members were lightly wounded, including Pretorius.
Blood River is of particular interest to me because my husband is a direct descendant of Andre Pretorius.
I mention this landmark battle in my book, A Ghost and His Gold. This is the relevant extract:
Pieter watched the young messenger, whose name was Adrian Opperman, part from his mother, who was one of the women brave enough to have accompanied her husband and son to the laager.
“Goodbye my son. Let your ways be in the fear of the Lord. If I do not see you again on earth, I pray to find you again in heaven.”
His heart constricted at this touching parting and he wondered if they would see each other again. He thought of the wording of the vow taken by his pioneer ancestors, the Voortrekkers, before the Battle of Blood River on the 16th of December 1838 when four hundred and seventy Voortrekkers, led by Andries Pretorius, fought against ten thousand Zulu warriors on the bank of the Ncome River.
We stand here before the Holy God of heaven and earth, to make a vow to Him that, if He will protect us and give our enemy into our hand we shall keep this day and date every year as a day of thanksgiving like a Sabbath, and that we shall build a house to His honour wherever it should please Him, and that we will also tell our children that they should share in that with us in memory for future generations. For the honour of His name will be glorified by giving Him the fame and honour for the victory.
Entrance to the museumFront of one of the replica ox wagons commemorating the battleReplica of the church that was built to fulfil the Vow detailed above.
W3 Prompt #7: Wea’ve Written Weekly
The Gun Tree by Robbie Cheadle
If you look closely at this tree, you’ll see it is constructed of guns
Guns
Bullets
Shiny new
Ready for use
Against dissenters
Regardless of their cause
Women and children punished
For the actions of their menfolk
Innocent blood amply watering
The ground that once sheltered and protected
Staining the earth black, splashing the growing crops
A fresh graveyard of dead animals and owners
Fragile houses riddled with holes – scene of destruction
Savagery wins
Rules unopposed
People succumb
To new regime
Hope disappears
Tree of life falls
This week’s prompt is as follows:
The change of seasons can be tough on us. It can shake our core and disturb our balance. The trees are a perfect example of how to adapt to changes. The branches and leaves flow with the wind and trees get bare or full of leaves, however, a tree’s strength is in the roots.
Let the words above inspire you and write a poem in “Tree of Life” poetic form about changes, impermanence, and strength.
Thank you to Professor Charles French for sharing my commentary and review of Grapes of Wrath by John Steinbeck. Charles has a wonderful selection of books so do have a look around while you are visiting his blog.
Here is another entry into the U.L.S., the Underground Library Society by Robbie Cheadle, a long-time member of this unofficial group. I am honored that Robbie Cheadle has written another entry–this one on The Grapes of Wrath by John Steinbeck.
The Grapes of Wrath by John Steinbeck
I knew about Grapes of Wrath and had read it was a masterpiece, but I only read it recently. My interest in this story was inspired by my younger son’s studies about the Great Depression in America. I also knew about the Great Depression and had read other books about it, but now was the time to do a deep dive into the horror story of that time. A deep dive that I had possibly been avoiding due to my belief that a lot of the detail in this book would still be relevant now, nearly 100 years later. Reading this book would be rubbing salt into mental wounds.
It was worth it; very worth it. The Grapes of Wrath is one of the most beautifully written and powerful books I’ve read, and I’ve read thousands of books.
Did you know there is a town called Dundee in KwaZulu-Natal, South Africa? It is a coal mining town and the reason we overnighted there is because it is close to the site of the Battle of Blood River which is a landmark battle between 464 Boers and an estimated 10,000 Zulus on the 16th of December 1838. I will tell you more about that battle next week. I wanted to spend a good few hours at The Battle of Blood River memorial and museum and also visit the Ncome Zulu Cultural Museum on the other side of Blood River where the battle was fought. There is a bridge of reconciliation between the two museums.
We spent our time in Dundee at the lovely and brand new B&B called Bella’s Rest. The B&B was on the edge of a manmade dam and had a nice view.
The entrance to the B&BSliding doors from our two rooms onto the private verandahSecurity door between the bedrooms section and the admin section.View across the dam. The restaurant was on the other side
Shapes in Nature
Look at all the rings in this picture – dam at DundeeThe waterfall formation in the Cango Caves, South AfricaThese two pictures were taken into the water in the Knysna Lagoon in the Western Cape. I was photographing a crab which you can see in the picture. I love the patterns.
My poem is based on this picture that was featured on my blogging friend, Meeka’s blog last year. If you enlarge this winning picture, you will see the people have no necks. It is so surreal that it won a prized. You can read Meeka’s article here: https://acflory.wordpress.com/2022/09/10/is-art-still-art-if-an-ai-makes-it/. I have not forgotten this post and artwork.
My August Dark Origins post discusses the English nursery rhyme, “Who Killed Cock Robin”. It never fails to amaze me how far back in time some of these possible origins go. Thanks for hosting, Kaye Lynne Booth.
Picture caption: H. L. Stephens – From The Project Gutenberg eBook, Death and Burial of Poor Cock Robin, by H. L. Stephens http://www.gutenberg.org/etext/17060
“Who Killed Cock Robin” is an English nursery rhyme which is believed to be ancient although the earliest record of the rhyme is in Tommy Thumb’s Pretty Song Book published in 1744. This version only contained the first four verses. The longer version was first printed in approximately 1770.
You can listen to a lovely rendition of “Who Killed Cock Robin” here:
I took one look at Colleen’s challenge this week and though “no way, this is much to complicated.” I went back later and it didn’t look so bad so I gave it a go.
For Dan Antion’s Thursday Doors, I am sharing a few doors pictures from our 3 days at Babanango Game Reserve. You can join in Dan’s challenge here: https://nofacilities.com/2023/08/17/wvu-doors/
Front door into our cottage at Babanango Game ReserveGate into our cottage area at Babanango – the fence keeps the animals away.
Yellow daffodil fairiesYellow fondant flowers on a portable record player cakeYellow sunsetYellow flowersYellow icing – this is a Mad Hatter Cake I made for Terence’s 40th. I don’t have a wonderful photograph as this was before I started taking pictures of my cakes for my blog. The top of the hat is decorated with two fondant animated playing cards who are painting the white roses red. If you look carefully, you will see some of the roses are half red and half white.
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