Today, I am delighted to welcome talented author, Jacqui Murray, with her latest novel in the Savage Land Book series, Balance of Nature.
Jacqui has kindly shared a lovely extract from Chapter 1 of the book.

Excerpt: Chapter 1
The area we now call Gibraltar
Shouts woke the brothers from their sleep.
“A boat—on the Endless Sea! Headed toward us!”
At night? How is that possible? But Kazeb didn’t ask because it didn’t matter. What mattered was that it was there.
He and Turk had waited long for this news, Kazeb with excitement, Turk with dread. Without discussion, they raced across the grassland, leapt over crevices, the width familiar even in the dark, and then scrambled up Big Rock’s knobby flank, grabbing tiny ledges with their fingers and toes with a speed mountain goats would envy. The behemoth’s height dwarfed all hills on the peninsula save the distant, towering range that separated it from others.
The brothers summited the crest and crouched behind a thick patch of scrub at the cliff’s edge. The brisk breeze atop the promontory whipped Kazeb’s hair around. He clenched his fists, gritted his teeth so tightly he should have broken a tooth, and waited for the vague elongated shadow on the water’s inky surface to reveal its intentions.
Is it them? He glanced at his brother’s square face. Turk thinks it is.
Sun’s steady arrival slowly erased the dark, made the sea shimmer in shades of blue as waves crashed against the coastline. Just below the surface, under the foam, were sharp shoals. Any boat must tediously avoid these, better yet, continue down the shore where there was no risk, unless they knew of the sole safe mooring used by natives and those they shared the location with, like they did with the Tall Ones from long ago.
Turk hissed, “It’s them, Liis.”
The Clan called him Liis, but he preferred “Kazeb,” the name awarded him when he agreed to guide the Tall One Fierce to the sea’s end. That was far beyond anywhere he had ever traveled, but Fierce claimed Kazeb’s knowledge of the area was invaluable.
“We can’t tell who is onboard, Turk,” he said, though who else knew of the hidden cove?
Kazeb rose and scanned a full circle, hoping whoever came on that craft wasn’t looking up here.
“What are you doing, Liis?”
“I need to see if they’re alone, or do more come from other directions.”
Flat grassland bordered one flank of the promontory, water the rest. Sun’s earliest rays colored the sky in pinks and blues. Birds plummeted into the crystalline water. Fish with no desire to be food dove. Farther away, pigs rooted through the stubble and a herd of deer feasted on ever-abundant fresh young shoots, protected by the range of mountains from unexpected predators.
When we finish, that’s where we will go.
He turned back to the shoreless sea. Visible on clear days, a faint brown outline shadowed the horizon, what the Tall One Fierce had called home.
Turk said, “They knew enough to stay in the calm waterswhen darkness arrived, to avoid the underwater shoals.”
Sun broke above the horizon, telling the boat it was safe to continue. The craft nimbly skirted the shoals, aiming for the spot a similar vessel had beached long ago. Kazeb gripped his spear tighter. Fierce had promised to return once his exploration was completed. Kazeb trusted his word, but the more time passed, the more he wondered if he had been lied to.
“Liis!” Turk interrupted his reverie. “There is another boat, behind the first!”
Now Kazeb saw it. Both prows plowed through the water, their shapes clear in the sunlight. Shivers ran through Kazeb.
These aren’t like Fierce’s craft … but we have seen no one from that direction either by sea or foot.
Kazeb studied the gaggle of Uprights, their bold stripes, the confident stance of the slender male in the bow of the front boat. All fit his recollections of the Tall One band. His gaze drifted to the back boat, a shorter stockier figure at the prow.
Is he Fierce’s guide? My replacement? But why would he be behind Fierce?
Legs wide for balance, sunlight glinting off flame-red hair, the sturdy figure scanned the Big Rock. To Kazeb’s surprise, his gaze paused at the clump of brush where the brothers hid. He couldn’t see them, of course. Both had mudded their skin and squinted to keep Sun’s glare off their eyes. Still, the figure shouted to One-who-might-be-Fierce and pointed.
Turk gurgled, “Are they looking for us? But why come back here, considering what they did?”
“We don’t know for sure—”
“Who else would it be?” Turk’s voice a strangled yelp.
They argued this question often. The Clan Healer originally thought the deadly illness had been caused by insects or a toxin in the air, but before he died, he admitted an individual could have poisoned the members’ food and water. Who could say?
Kazeb didn’t bother to reply, busy admiring the vessel’s sleek profile, so unlike the Clan’s flatter, smaller ones. The sailors effortlessly beached it at the base of the monstrous rock where the brothers hid.
Voice fiery, Turk hissed, “Our destiny has arrived, why we survive and the rest died.”

Book Blurb
A tribe haunted by the past. Lies that threaten the future. A reason to find the truth.
Savage Land is the third trilogy about prehistoric man in the series, Man. Vs. Nature. Savage Land explores how two bands of humans survived one of the worst natural disasters in Earth’s history, when volcanic eruptions darkened the sky, massive tsunamis crossed the ocean in crushing waves, and raging fires burned the land. Viral tribes of Neanderthals and early man considered themselves apex predators, but that crown belonged to Nature and she was intent on washing the two-legged blight from her lands.
In Balance of Nature, Book Three of the trilogy, Yu’ung’s Neanderthal tribe hopes to settle at Gibraltar but instead find unexpected threats and lethal challenges. Follow the courageous Yu’ung, the determined Kazeb, the mystical Shanadar, and the pawed-and-clawed Canis as they navigate a perilous world of tribal conflict, unexplained visions, and shifting loyalties. Their journey is a testament to the resilience and strength of true leadership in a sweeping saga that ultimately leads to who we are today
Purchase Balance of Nature by Jacqui Murray
Amazon US purchase link: https://www.amazon.com/Balance-Nature-Savage-Land-Book-ebook/dp/B0G45MFBWW
Jacqui Murray Amazon Author Page: https://www.amazon.com/stores/Jacqui-Murray/author/B002E78CQQ
My review of Endangered Species (Savage Land Book 1)

Endangered Species is an interesting and unique story set 75,000 years ago in Europe and Asia. The plot follows two people, Jun who must leave his clan and travel from what is now called Germany to what is now known as the Altai Mountains, to help save the clan of Yu’ung who are under threat from an active volcanic mountain.
The author’s extensive research is clearly evident in this book, but the historical facts and information are integrated into the storyline in a completely natural way and are not cumbersome or ‘textbook’ like in any way. There is a mild paranormal element which is also smoothly incorporated into the story and does not detract from the historical elements or undermine their integrity.
The characters are interesting and both Jun and Yu’ung have attributes and characteristics that artfully share a large spectrum of the skills and thinking of our ancient predecessors. Jun is a dreamer who wants more from life than the everyday tasks of survival. As a result, he is viewed as a shirker by his clan who cannot see any benefit to Jun’s restless and adventurous spirit. Yu’ung is a young female, the product of her clan’s healer and a ‘stranger’. Yu’ung has been brought up by her mother and the clan’s oldest most experienced Elder resulting in her having unusual skills including those of a healer and those of a hunter. She is highly intelligent and had extraordinarily good eyesight, both of which set her apart from her fellows. Despite her differences, she is held in high regard by her clan, especially when several of their men die in a cave in and the clan is left short of competent hunters.
This is a character driven book and the two main characters, and their main supporters make for fascinating reading that reveals a lot of information about life at the time as well as the attitudes, customs, and challenges.
The introduction of the ‘Tall Ones’, a more aggressive clan of people with a more adventurous attitude and a desire to dominate is intriguing and creates interesting interactions and tensions throughout the story.
In summary, this is a fascinating story with well-developed characters that will appeal to readers who enjoy a character driven storyline suffused with well researched historical information about life during a time period that is still shrouded in mystery.
Amazon US purchase link for Endangered Species (Savage Land Book 1): https://www.amazon.com/Endangered-Species-Savage-Land-Book-ebook/dp/B0DJ9Y7PQ8
About Jacqui Murray

Jacqui Murray is the author of the popular prehistoric fiction saga, Man vs. Nature which explores seminal events in man’s evolution one trilogy at a time. She is also author of the Rowe-Delamagente thrillers and Building a Midshipman
, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy. Her non-fiction includes 100+ books on tech into education, and a freelance journalist on tech ed topics.
Find Jacqui Murray:
Amazon Author Page: https://www.amazon.com/Jacqui-Murray/e/B002E78CQQ/
Blog: https://worddreams.wordpress.com
Pinterest: http://pinterest.com/askatechteacher
X: http://twitter.com/worddreams
Website: https://jacquimurray.net
Looking forward to starting Jacqui’s book as soon as I finish up the one I’m reading now. She has the right balance of factual information embedded in an entertaining story.
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Thank you for hosting me, Robbie. It’s a cloudy, gloomy day here and I’m looking forward to meeting new friends!
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My pleasure, Jacqui. My copy of this book arrived yesterday.
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That’s good they’re getting them out.
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Sorry, Pete–I added my last comment in the wrong spot. I’m trying a new browser out and got mixed up.
Thanks for your comments. I am gratified, especially from a fellow teacher.
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This is a good summary of Jacqui’s books, Pete. Thank you 😊
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This is a great post and a great excerpt. I ordered the paperback version of Balance of Nature today. Well actually it is past midnight here so yesterday. I am very excited to read it.
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Hi Thomas, that is great to know. I have always had an interest in prehistoric man and have visited the Cradle of Mankind several times. I hope to visit Cape Aguilar in September this year. This area is also an important archeological site https://sites.google.com/view/agulhas-heritage-erfenis/structures-and-places-strukture-en-plekke
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I also think that is very fascinating and one reason I love Jacqui’s books. I would like to visit the Cradle of Mankind one day. I’ve never been to South Africa, or even anywhere in Africa.
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I would like to visit Cape Aguilar too. I’ve never been to Hong Kong either.
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Africa is an interesting continent and a different experience from Europe which I have visited several times. I’ve also been to South Korea, Japan and New Zealand. I have not been to either of the Americas.
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You are certainly well travelled but it is interesting that you have not been to either of the Americas. Right now might not be the right time to visit the United States though. I would wait.
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We won’t come now, timing is wrong. It is because the US uses a different accounting framework from the rest of the world. TC will never travel on business to the USA.
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Oh I did not realize that
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You stay up late! I’d been asleep for hours. Thanks for the order, Thomas.
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How great to see Jacqui’s next book in this amazing series. A great review on Endangered Species too. xo
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And it takes place in on of Amanda’s locations! Well, kind of, if Gibraltar is close by European standards. Thanks for visiting, Darlene.
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Oh yes. Gibraltar borders Spain. I have seen the “Big Rock” mentioned!
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Of course, 75,000 years ago, the shore was much broader, the caves much more removed from the sea/ocean, the land somewhat greener, but the climate was still magnificent by Neanderthal standards.
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Thank you, Darlene 💜
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Jacqui’s books are always like a fantastic movie. She doesn’t disappoint.
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Thank you so much, Anneli. I like the sound of that.
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Thank you for your lovely comment.
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An interesting excerpt and wonderful review! Congratulations to Jacqui on her new book!
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Robbie and I share an interest in old caves which often means prehistoric man. She’s introduced me to many South African mysteries I’ve enjoyed exploring.
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I’ve never visited any caves, but I’m fascinated by prehistoric art and artifacts.
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If you want to do so from the safety of your home, search ‘caves’ on Robbie’s blog. I wish I could have gone with her.
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Thank you, Merril
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You’re welcome, Robbie.
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I’ve come across Jacqui on comments on other websites but have not read any of her books. The extract and your review have piqued my interest.
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I am curious how we got where we are. That is the engine behind all of my stories. How DID we survive? I hope you join me.
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I just subscribed. Looking forward to getting to know you better than from your comments other blogs. Vivienne
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I loved the focus of your blog on writing, writers, writerly stuff. That is much appreciated. And I see some of my good efriends there (Anneli Purchase). Going over to click also!
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Thank you, Jacqui.
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Hi Viv, given your interest in ancient history and enjoyment of research and writing historical literature, I think you would enjoy this series 💗
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They do sound like my kind of books. Thanks for the introduction.
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This is beautiful writing by Jacqui. Descriptive and you can envision every scene, every moment – and everyone you can feel. Congratulations to Jacqui and I look forward to reading. Thank you for sharing, Robbie.
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Thank you so much, Mabel. I hope you enjoy the characters.
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My pleasure, Mabel. I’m delighted you enjoyed the extract.
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What a lovely review. Jacqui does such a great job with this series. Sending all best wishes that her book does super well.
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Thank you! I’m trying not to look at the numbers on Amazon. It can become obsessive.
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Indeed. It’s hard not to focus on them but be gentle with youself.
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Thank you for visiting 🩵
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Thank you for hosting. 😉
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Great excerpt and review. Robbie, I agree with you that Jacqui is skilled at weaving her research seamlessly into the story. Congrats to Jacqui on this new release!
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I had a lot of starts-and-stops with that. At one point, I had footnotes, which I dumped at the suggestion of beta readers. I’m glad I did.
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That’s interesting. I use footnotes in some of my stories about South Africa.
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When I finally incorporated the information into the story, it made a big difference to the reading. I was glad I did it.
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It depends on the footnotes. Mine are just clarifications on Afrikaans words in case some people don’t understand from the context.
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Your comment is exactly right, Priscilla. Thank you for visiting.
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Thank you for this Robbie 🙂
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Thanks for visiting!
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My pleasure, Paul 💜
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It’s wonderful of you to contribute to Jacqui’s book tour, Roberta. It is a fascinating read.
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Robbie and I share a love of animals, nature, the deep past, and caves. There are so many of her posts I have saved.
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Fantastic, Jacqui! 😍
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There is a museum at Cape Agulas relating to prehistoric man. I hope to visit it in September this year. If you are interesting in finding out more about this archeological dig, I left a link on Thomas’ comment.
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Hi Tim, it is my pleasure to showcase Jacqui’s latest book here. Thank you 💗
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Best wishes to Jacqui!
Thank you for sharìng Robbie
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Thank you! Appreciate the visit.
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My pleasure Jacqui.
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My pleasure, Maggie 🧡
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It’s great to see Jacqui here for her tour, Robbie, and what an excellent review. I enjoyed the read (I enjoy all of Jacqui’s books), and it will be fun to see what she comes up with next. Congrats, Jacqui, on your launch!
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Thank you, Diana, and your spotlight was much appreciated. It went a little off topic, which I left to you, but I hope I weighed in on everything to do with my book. It was a far-ranging post!
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I’ve only been posting once a month, so the posts are a little more “off topic.” I dislike being such a downer, Jacqui, but I’m so upset. I’m going to be taking a long break starting in a couple of weeks. I need to focus on my well being. When/if I’m back, hopefully I’ll be my cheery self again.
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I understand, completely. I did a similar thing a while back. You have so much to offer.
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Hi Diana, it’s lovely to see you. I’m delighted you enjoyed the review.
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A super review of Jacqui’s first in the series, Robbie. Also, it is great to see her on your blog today. Great excerpt, Jacqui. All the best on this one.
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Hi John, it’s lovely to see you. Thanks for your supportive comment 😊
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Thanks, John. I’m looking forward to your blog, too. I giggle at our collaborative article. I think readers will like it.
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And she’s off! Go, Jacqui, go! 🙂
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Ha! I’m panting already!
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Haha! Take frequent water breaks, and I hope you stretched first. 😛
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Shoot–forgot to stretch!
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Tisk-tisk. Come now, Jacqui, you’ve done these before. 😛
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I ordered my copy last night when the announcement came in from Amazon by email. This sounds as spellbinding as the last two were! Well done both Jacqie and Robbie.
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Thank you, Marsha 🧡
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I think it wraps things up well for the trilogy with a touch of setup for the next. I hope you like it.
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I can’t wait to sink my teeth into it. I’m going on a cruise in 10 days!
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Love this excerpt, Robbie! It really sets the fast-action pace for the rest of the book.
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Hi Dora, it does indeed. Thanks for visiting.
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It’s hard to tell in the excerpt but these two brothers are at the core of the story’s plot. I like how it worked out.
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So intriguing, Jacqui, and the world-building is off to a great start too, peaking curiosity.
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Congratulations to Jacqui! Sharing to help spread the word.
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Thank you, Liz
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You’re welcome, Robbie.
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You are wonderful today, Liz. Thank you!
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You’re welcome, Jacqui! I’m happy to help.
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A lovely review, Robbie, and I will look forward to reading Balance of Nature – at the moment I am reading Badlands. I love these books, Jacqui!
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I’m so glad you have both, Chris. You won’t have to wonder how Fierce solves that end-of-book problem in Badlands!
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Great beginning! I’m back to reading my TBR list and look forward to reading the final book in Jacqui’s remarkable series. Thanks for sharing!
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My pleasure, Dawn 🌈
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Another fascinating excerpt and great send off for Jacqui’s new book Robbie. ♥
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I love the excerpt. I admire so much those who can write compelling stories…
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Gripping and compelling review, Robbie and I loved the excerpts you picked. Jacqui did it again. Just when you think they’re safe, there’s more trouble in paradise. xx
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Just like in real life 😉. Thanks, Cindy
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absolutely.. you’re so welcome!! xx
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Jacqui’s books always intrigue me. I wish I could get them at my library. I did check Kobo, too.
I adore historical settings with well done research.
Robbie, you are a perfect person to comment on the meticulous research Jacqui has done. Thank you for this review!
Jacqui, thank you for writing!
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Hi Resa, you always write the nicest comments. Thank you 🩷🙏
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