Thank you to Nolcha Fox from Chewers by Masticadores for sharing part 7 of my WIP, The Soldier and the Radium Girl.
Jake Tanner
30 September 2021
The ship had crawled up the coast for five days, reaching its destination the previous evening. Once on the ocean, Jake found his sea legs quickly and looked forward to the periods when his platoon was allowed on deck, and he could look at the dark body of water that heaved and churned relentlessly. He found it endlessly fascinating.
Mike was not as fortunate and experienced ongoing seasickness.
He’d languished in his narrow bunk until Beau goaded him into going up on deck with Jake and Joe.
“You would be seasick, Mike,” Beau laughed. “You’re not only the runt of the litter, but the weakling, too.”
After ten minutes of walking up and down the deck, inhaling the tangy ocean air, he’d admitted to feeling much better. “I’m glad you made me come outside.”
Their interludes on deck were far too short, and the trio spent a lot of time playing cards, shooting the wind, and talking about “over there” with their contemporaries.
Continue reading here: https://chewersmasticadores.wordpress.com/2025/11/28/the-soldier-and-the-radium-girl-part-1-the-bloom-of-youth-chapter-1-enlist-in-haste-repent-at-leisure-cont-7-by-roberta-eaton-cheadle/
Excellent, Robbie! That “…showing large yellow teeth like tombstones” line is brilliant and ominous.
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Thank you, Dave 😁
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Another wonderful instalment Robbie.
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Thanks, Maggie
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My pleasure Robbie 🤗
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Terrific writing as always!
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Thank you, John
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I had to play catch up today- wonderful writing!
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I know that feeling 🥰
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A lot of good in this snippet.
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Thanks, Jacqui. I hope you had a good Thanksgiving 😊
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Congratulations, Robbie!
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Thank you, Nicole
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A salty adventure. 😁
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Heading over, Robbie! Congrats on the publication.
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Thank you, Diana 💛
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That’s a fantastic story, Roberta. Congratulations that it was posted there!
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I’m glad you are enjoying this story, Tim
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Congratulations, Robbie! Clicking over to read the rest.
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Thank you, Liz
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You’re welcome, Robbie.
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This is so good, I’m heading over to read the rest.
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Thanks, Jennie. Charles helped me with some of the Americanisms.
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Charles is so good. I’m glad he helped you.
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He is very generous with his time.
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He really is! 😍
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Beautiful series, Robbie!
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