Esther’s writing prompt for this week is Waiting. You can join in here: https://estherchilton.co.uk/2025/03/26/writing-prompts-58/
In the waiting room
There is solidarity is the waiting room. No one wants to be there. Everyone is waiting for news. People smile sympathy at each other, as if it were a tangible item to be gifted. The walls are shiny white. So white they’re almost blinding. The smell of disinfectant lingers, it’s tones acrid and bitter. An attempt to eliminate the stench of anxiety, overripe, like rotting fruit. The combination forces acid bile up my throat. It burns. The hustle and bustle of the hospital is distant and muted in the waiting room. There are no distractions. I sit and unwanted memories come. Memories of other, similar waits. So many. More than I can count on both hands and feet, twice over.
Waiting room prison
Full of memory felons
Will he live or die
New book
My new poetry collection, Burning Butterflies, is available for pre-order on Amazon here: https://www.amazon.com/Burning-Butterflies-Poetry-Southern-African-ebook/dp/B0F2SDF2GW

Blurb
Butterflies are interpreted, inter alia, as symbols of transformation and change, hope and rebirth, spirituality, the soul, creativity, nature, beauty, and resurrection. Faced with the annihilation of much of the planet’s forests, wetlands, and other habitats for wildlife, all the wonderful things that butterflies symbolise are gradually being destroyed.
This book celebrates Southern African flora and fauna, while acknowledging the threats it faces.
Striking cover Robbie. Butterflies are so delicate and it is hard to tell what we have lost.
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HI Janet, indeed, and we are only at the beginning.
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Those memories on waiting are so strong. Thank you for sharing that, Robbie.
Good luck with the new book. It looks amazing. Fab cover.
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HI Esther, thank you for your comment and support.
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Medical waiting rooms — ugh. You skillfully captured the feeling of being in them, Robbie.
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Thank you, Dave
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Love your poem Robbie!
The cover is stunning and bold .
Best wishes for your new book release.
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Thank you, Maggie, for your kind comment. This is the end of my pre-order promotion for my book.
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Hi Robbie
My pleasure always.
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Fascinating, Robbie, and I always enjoy your poems!
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Thank you, Grant. That is lovely to know 💓
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I think we have all sat in that waiting room Robbie you described it so well. 💜😀😀
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Yes, I’m sure most people have this experience at some point. 🤗💚
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Very evocatively described Robbie.
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These memories are very vivid for me 🧡
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Beautiful
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Your thoughts on wildlife are wonderful, Robbie!
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Thank you, Tim 💜
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Thank you for being who you are, Robbie. You’re wonderful. 💖
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Hugs
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I think most people can relate to the waiting room.
Your book cover is so striking, Robbie. Beautiful!
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Hi Merril, I’m sure most people experience a hospital waiting room at some point. It’s always so awful. I’m delighted you like this cover.
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Yes, it is awful, and I do.
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You have described so well the waiting room angst. Ugh. (But wonderfully written!)
And I have to agree, the cover of your latest book is stunning!
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The cover image is perfect. I hope the book does well.
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I know this feeling. We were there when my father had his first Heart Attack! You described it very well!
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Wow, great haibun and just love that cover work.
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HI Paul, thank you so much
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Much deserved 😀
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Very poignant story, verse, and intro to your book Robbie. Best wishes on your new book.
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Sharing…
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Thank you, Jacqui
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This haibun is a perfect gem. I’ve been in those waiting rooms too many times.
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Awful, isn’t it. At least on Friday I’m the patient and TC is in London so no-one has to wait around in the waiting room.
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It is. I hope you surgery goes well and your hospital stay is uneventful.
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Thank you, Liz
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You’re welcome, Robbie.
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You have me heart as I have been that white wall prisoner much of my life! The new book, well my heart awaits capture…
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Hi Annette, I am sorry that you are also a prisoner of the waiting room. Hugs.
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Striking cover and poignant poem. I greatly admire your incredible talents.
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This looks good, Robbie. I think I need a ‘proper’ book when it’s out – not a Kindle this time.
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I also like paperbacks, Chris, but I wait and order several books together to reduce the shipping costs. They have become very high lately.
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Exactly, me too!
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Captivating haibun. Congratulations on the beautiful book, Robbie. i’ll get myself a copy soon.💖🌼
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I’ve been in too many of those myself. You capture the starkness. (K)
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It seems many of us have been in this situation a few times. Thanks, Kerfe.
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Good luck Friday Robbie. I’ll be thinking of you.
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Thank you, Kerfe
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I love butterflies! Your book will be lovely. I’m giving it a shout-out on my blog tomorrow (Friday, Apr. 4th). I see that it’s a #1 New Release on Pre-Order! That’s fabulous. Congratulations!
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Thank you, Dawn. Appreciated 💜🪻
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How exciting about your poetry book, Robbie. Warmest congratulations. Hugs.
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Thank you, Teagan 💗
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The Waiting Room is powerful. Congratulations on your poetry book!
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Thank you, Jennie
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You’re welcome, Robbie.
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