Roberta Writes – D’Verse Quadrille: Feeling Crabby #poetry #D’verse

The talented Merril D. Smith is the host of this week’s D’Verse Quadrille poetry prompt. You can read Merril’s poem here: https://merrildsmith.org/2024/07/08/messier-1-the-crab-nebula/

You can join in the prompt here: https://dversepoets.com/2024/07/08/quadrille-203-feeling-crabby/

So to be clear: for this prompt, you must write a poem of exactly 44 words AND make certain it includes the word crab, or some form of the word—crabby, crabapple, crabbing, etc. Bonus points if you want to include anniversary and/or thirteen, as well. I’m certain there will be a wide variety of responses, both literal and metaphorical–because we have a diverse group at dVerse! Post your poem to your blog, place the link in Mister Linky below, and then read and comment on others’ poems.

Hermit Crab

The strong December sunlight

Softly filters through

The shallow water of the lagoon

The light refracts

Colourful shards rippling

In every direction

Hermit crab

Peeps out

Of his front door

Liking what he sees

He ventures forth

Across the dabbled sand

An exciting adventure

Picture captions: Hermit crab on the bottom of the Knysna Lagoon. I love the refraction and light in these pictures.

55 thoughts on “Roberta Writes – D’Verse Quadrille: Feeling Crabby #poetry #D’verse

          1. I understand completely. I cannot just write for form poetry without being able to connect it to something authentic. If I can’t connect it, I don’t write.

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  1. I love the way you set the scene, Robbie, with those ‘colourful shards rippling’ and then introduce the hermit crab, and the phrase ‘dabbled sand’ – and great photos to illustrate your poem!

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  2. I can’t exactly remember when, but there was a craze to have Hermit Crabs as pets. Of course you did need to be aware that when they grew that they needed bigger shels to crawl into.

    I like the dappled sunlite too. Hard to get a good photo through water. Very good!

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