W3 a San san poem
II. Kerfe’s prompt guidelines
- Thematic (required): Write a poem inspired by-
- A song about dancing, or-
- A song you like to dance to;
- Form (required): “San san”.
San san?
The “san san” poetic form has three requirements:
- Eight lines;
- Rhyming: a-b-c-a-b-d-c-d;
- Repetition: Three terms or images in the verse must be repeated 3x each.
I’m late with this post. What can I say, I had a life sized guitar to make this weekend for Michael’s birthday and it didn’t leave much time for other things. I also made Gregory a hummingbird cake for his birthday and I cooked chicken korma for 20 people and made salads and vegetables to go with it.


And now for the poem:
Rain Dance
We must dance to summon the rain
The land is parched; thirsty cattle low
We must dance to appease the gods
It’s not easy to please the gods; they’re vain
We must dance for rain so the rivers flow
The gods always admire our feathers and beads
We twirl and stamp, hitting the ground with rods
When rain comes, we’ll plant life sustaining seeds
Thank you to David for the inspiration: https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/02/07/w3-prompt-93-weave-written-weekly/
What an amazing dance! Thank you for sharing it, along with your beautiful words.
Your cake is amazing to – I used polymer clay to make someone a small violin only about three inches long 🙂
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HI Jules, that sounds wonderful. I would like a gift like that. I’m glad you like the poem and cake.
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I had made quite a few home made beads too.
Enough for some braclets and necklaces 🙂
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🌈💞
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